|
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 10 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
10% |
30% |
20% |
10% |
10% |
10% |
10% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
| Average
Rating: (6.5/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (10/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (4/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Dusty Spring
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 15, 2010 |
| |
Can't wait to see where you go with this. You're on a roll, tho, so get to the next part. (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
schoolboylv
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Aug 31, 2006 |
| |
Good story, needs some grammar work. Why not use an editor when you publish your next story.... (7/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Rabbit1
(Edit) (Aug 31, 2006)
- thanks ---but you know when real people talk ---very seldom do they use perfect grammar---think about it ---it was meant to be a sex story not a litary master piece---
I do think that the reviewers should focus more on the story ---the flow of the story --and not so much on grammar---there is a simple guide to help reviewers ----
How to write a review? Do's and Dont's.
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/faq.html#8
there are two good reasons I will not publish the rest of the story here---first was the poor reviews---second I sold the story ---After I sold it and was paid for my work ---I then cleaned up the grammar---and finished the story --so what do you all expect for free---Gone With the Wind?
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
La Toya
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 23, 2006 |
| |
Yes the story had some minor problems thats others have pointed out. I will wait to see were you take the story, as I am willing to raise my review rating. (6/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Rabbit1
(Edit) (Mar 10, 2006)
- Thanks for all the reviews ---there will not be a continuation of this story as ---it will now be published when I finish it ---a publisher contacted me about it and made me a good deal on it---sorry if you want to see how it turns out --you will have to pay to see the rest
Cheers---and thanks again all
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
H Dean
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 21, 2006 |
| |
The story suffered from a bland and lifeless delivery. Furthermore, out of place commas and generally bad grammar mad it entirely difficult to truly enjoy this story. Quite honestly, it seemed as if the story was composed in haste and failed to receive a proper edit. (4/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
jip
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 21, 2006 |
| |
Mixed feelings about the story. (5/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
bigcat
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 21, 2006 |
| |
Concept is not my cup, but even with that, tried to be fair. Found it trite and and not entirely well executed. Nothing new or different here. Perhaps later. Good effort though. Keep at it. (6/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 20, 2006 |
| |
I personally found this story to be lacking in something --- zip or voomph! The storyline is so old--date rape drug and then raping the girl and making her into your own slut! This is a male fantasy, I guess and not geared towards chicks. (5/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
tragedy3
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 20, 2006 |
| |
good job rabbit1. can't wait for more. (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 20, 2006 |
| |
great start, can't wait for more, this is my rtype of story and theme
I do look at grmmar but i also rate and review based on my story taste, if i rated stories on grammar not of those i reviewed would be a 5 plus
hope you post more chapters soon (10/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
chksng19
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 19, 2006 |
| |
Now this is a tough one to review. Let's get the obvious stuff out of the way: several spellchecker errors. Some factual errors. Quotation marks are a wonderful thing, you might use them.
The story plot is an old one. The first section posted doesn't really break any new ground, and the telling of the story is rather simply worded, as though not for adults (though the topic certainly is). (5/10)
|
|
|
About 