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Mattie & Cerys - In the beginning
Author: Romy
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(Added on Feb 1, 2006)
(This month 65563 readers) (Total 85911 readers) |
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The first chapter in the lives of lovers Mattie & Cerys. Mattie is to Top and Cerys, the pushy bottom. First chapter, how they meet. Cerys is the Ultimate painslut. Can Mattie break her? |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
phoenix072124
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Dec 3, 2006 |
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A great story here, please say you are adding more? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Feb 3, 2006 |
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The rest is history? Not the ending I would like to see. This should be a longer story (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Feb 1, 2006 |
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I can actually see a good story in here. The problems lie with a lifeless delivery. Further, the lack of life is actually amplified by the lack of proper punctuation. I don't think I have ever seen this occur in such dramatic fashion as in this story. (4/10)
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