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Gina\' Execution
Author: Elecutrix
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(Added on Feb 1, 2006)
(This month 68342 readers) (Total 100310 readers) |
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Gina in the Electric Chair |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
elecutrix
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Aug 14, 2006 |
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Great story! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mmmarleen
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Aug 11, 2006 |
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Detail was very well expressed
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- Replied by:
elecutrix
(Edit) (Aug 11, 2006)
- thx mmmarleen
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 6, 2006 |
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Erotic or not, this is a well written short story. Very acurate details, too.. The clinical way in which the story is handled, adds to its quality...
Very nicely done. Though I'm not that keen on snuff stories, this gets a well deserved nine out of ten, just because of the...err...execution.
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
elecutrix
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2006)
- Read my new story on Betsey's execution.
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| Reviewer:
kaeiria
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Mar 6, 2006 |
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flat (4/10)
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- Replied by:
elecutrix
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2006)
- Read my other stories on Laura and Betsey's executions.
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| Reviewer:
Fetterer
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Feb 9, 2006 |
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I liked it. It is unclear if the author intended that the story be erotic. Any eroticism was implied. I would read other work by this author. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
elecutrix
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2006)
- Read my other stories on Laura and Betsey's executions.
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Feb 4, 2006 |
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This is an interesting piece. The clinical/bureaucratic repot style contrasted with the sexual aspects of the execution form an interesting contrast.
One note: The final paragraphs are in too small a font, making them very difficult to read. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
elecutrix
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2006)
- Read my other stories on Laura and Betsey's executions.
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| Reviewer:
rob.wilson
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Feb 4, 2006 |
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I was unsure if I was even going to review the story. I didn't find it erotic, but you had hints of erotism. The clinical style was a turn off to me, but at the same time you hinted of emotions bubbling under the surface.
May I be so bold to suggest something? Write another two stories with the same charaters. One from Gina's point of view. Another from the wardens point of view. Connect all three togather into one tale and I think you have a hell of a good story! (5/10)
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- Replied by:
elecutrix
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2006)
- Read my other stories on Laura and Betsey's executions.
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| Reviewer:
bdanials
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Feb 3, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed this story. The clinical writing style used for this story made it seem more realistic and polished. I do wish the story was a bit longer, though. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
elecutrix
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2006)
- Read my other stories on Laura and Betsey's executions.
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| Reviewer:
sheilagirl
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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I was electrified reading this. I found the short story to be extremely erotic. I liked the very clinical matter of fact way the execution took place. I don't think a real execution would be that much different except perhaps for the placement of the electrodes. Something about execution by electrocution fascinates me. If I had anything to complain about it would be that I would have liked it to be stretched out a little longer. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
elecutrix
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2006)
- Read my other stories on Laura and Betsey's executions.
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| Reviewer:
Guiller
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Feb 1, 2006 |
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lacks somo "soul?" (4/10)
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- Replied by:
elecutrix
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2006)
- Read my other stories on Laura and Betsey's executions.
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