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Wicked Angel - Keri
Author: Sub Dad
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(Added on Jan 30, 2006)
(This month 56915 readers) (Total 71209 readers) |
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Keri is a breathtaking teenage Dominatrix who uses and abuses the adults in her life to include her father. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
kinkyled
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Oct 15, 2007 |
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I really loved the story but there could be a few changes such as the father's size. I loved Keri however and would love to be one of her slaves. If the story continues, I hope to see more about how Keri dominates her slaves, her father as her slave, the assistant principal leaving his wife to worship her full time and how Keri adds other teachers and neighbors to her stable of slaves. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
robert216
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Feb 1, 2006 |
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I think this is a very well written story that has a few weaknesses, which can be easily fixed (or as easily over looked by the reader.) If I was advising the author, I would reduce cock sizes, reduce breast and nipple sizes, and increase the girls age. Also the story changes narrators without warning. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 31, 2006 |
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well, the description how a 13 yr old girl talks is not very realistic. Careful, in most countries you can be caught for pedophylia... (5/10)
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underherthumb
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Jan 30, 2006 |
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Maybe the author is from another country and mistranslated the measurements, but it is a turn off to read about an almost nine foot guy with a 19" cock! (5/10)
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