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Lisa\'s Reality
Author: Aussiegirl
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(Added on Jan 22, 2006)
(This month 17499 readers) (Total 41972 readers) |
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When Lisa is abducted she wakes to find herself in a whole new reality. How will she cope with her new life as a slave? |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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Rating: (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 27, 2009 |
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Funny how an ever recurring theme, that has been milked more often than yonder dairy cow, can still entice praise and stir the reader into going slightly wild.
But, of course, only when there's a couple of requirements that are being met.
Aussiegirl's scribblings here grandly fullfill those requirements, in that the story is inventive, portrays a character in an in-depth, subbtle way and paints a general surrounding that is acceptable in the least.
The story never gets boring, never makes one exclaim "aw, not again...", but instead, keeps the reader alert, curious and on edge, while at the same time speaking directly to some deeply rooted instincts that tend to generate a copious amount of endorphines...
"Wicked, extremely well written tale", is but a bleak rendition of my innermost feelings. Thank you.
JJ (10/10)
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Maitre1962
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Dec 1, 2007 |
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WOW!!! What a story!!!! You are an amazing writer,Aussiegirl! I could not tear myself away from that story and also added it to my favourites!!!!!!! (10/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 31, 2007 |
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they do not get much better then this, changed my review hope youlike the new number (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Feb 7, 2006)
- Hi mkemse,
What can I say but thank you.
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| Reviewer:
robert216
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Feb 7, 2006 |
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Well done. I agree with the comments of most of the other reviewers. A minor point, I felt you needed to develop the relationships just a bit more to explain why the girls whould chose to continue being slaves, even if with Master they liked. Lisa may have been "born" to be submissive, but Catlin clearly was not. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Feb 7, 2006)
- Thanks robert216,
I can see your point. I felt that Caitlin stayed with Justin because she had grown to trust and love him, but I can see where I could have explored that more. Thanks for that.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 6, 2006 |
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A fine story, romance, D/s, a whisper of BDSM, lots of other fine elements. I quite enjoyed the story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Feb 6, 2006)
- Thanks,
I am pleased that you enjoyed the story and took the time to review it.
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Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Feb 6, 2006)
- Thanks,
I am glad you liked the story and took the time to review it. It really helps to hear what readers think.
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| Reviewer:
msilsby
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Feb 4, 2006 |
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Excellent work, both stories are very enjoyable. Drop me a line if I can help you with any editing, etc.
Cheers (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Feb 4, 2006)
- Hi msilsby,
Thanks for taking the time to read and review my stories, so pleased you liked them. I am still playing around with different styles at the moment, my mind just full of ideas. Will keep your offer in mind though.
aussiegirl
(ps) Go review the other story and up it's score if you think it deserves it!
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timid1
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Jan 30, 2006 |
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i really enjoyed this story. I could identify with the characters. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Jan 30, 2006)
- Thank you timid1.
I guess I hoped that the characters would seem real to people, so thanks for taking the time to let me know. I am glad you enjoyed the story, I had fun writing it.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jan 26, 2006 |
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This was an excellent story and I would have given it a 9 except for all the typos. The idea though that a woman would appreciate being kidnapped and trained as a slave is just beyond me though. But as I said, it was very well thought out, had a good plot, and best of all, they all lived happily ever after! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Jan 29, 2006)
- Thanks heycarrieanne,
I appreciate your comments and am glad you liked the story despite my typos. I too like a happy ending, though it may not always be that way in all my stories.
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| Reviewer:
isabeau
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Jan 26, 2006 |
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fantastic story. over the last few days i have been quite amazed at the stories i have read. this is truly one of the best ever yet. i so love a happy ending. and a story with a plot always intrigues me. i grew very fond of Lisa and her master. very diverse characters. keep up the great writing. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Jan 29, 2006)
- Thanks Isabeau,
I too grew to like the characters as I progressed with the story. I am pleased that you enjoyed the story and thanks for taking the time to let me know how you felt about it.As a first time writer I had no idea what people would think.
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Jan 26, 2006 |
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well, i finally got to finish your story. on Australia Day! what can i say? Triple J's Hottest 100, the cricket, the tennis and a really good slave story!! ok, the review : loved the story. please take these next as constructive: towards the end i could tell you were getting tired. the grammatical and spelling errors got a little out of control. and one other thing i would add, although it is strictly a presentation thing. for a story this long, with chapters built in, i would appreciate if it was posted in chapters. it makes it much easier to read if you cant read it all in one sitting. having to log in and find where you are up to again is a bit tedious in one long page, and as you have said that you have some other stories nearly ready to post, it might be worth considering. thank you for a great story
respectfully yours blu
ps, i enjoy non linear stories! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Jan 26, 2006)
- Thanks J's blu,
I agree about it being a good way to spend Australia day. I actually spent part of the day finishing of a new story, with Triple J on too.
As for the chapters, I only realised after I had sent in the story that it would be posted all in one go, but I did the right thing and posted the next one in chapters to make it easier.Thanks for the feedback and glad you liked the story.
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| Reviewer:
new_kitten
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Jan 25, 2006 |
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I should have been working the whole time i was reading your story but could not turn away. Being new to BDSM I found your story interesting and exciting, even with a few tears. Simply GREAT! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Jan 25, 2006)
- Thanks new kitten,
I was lucky I was on holidays when I decided to try and write a story, so I didn't have to think about what else I should be doing.
Thanks for taking the time to let me know how you felt about the story. As a first time writer it means a lot.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Jan 25, 2006 |
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This was a great story! It was well done from start to finish. It showed the good parts of the lifestyle. It also showed a bad part of it as well.
I look forward to seeing mor of your writing (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Jan 25, 2006)
- Thanks La Toya,
I am glad you liked the story and took the time to let me know. I had hoped that others would like it, but you never know. I have more stories almost ready to post, so I hope you will like them too.
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| Reviewer:
SENIOR
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Jan 24, 2006 |
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The entire story was well paced and gives more then a linier story line and was an enjoyable read. please keep up the good work (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Jan 25, 2006)
- Thanks Senior,
I am glad that you enjoyed the story.
Thank you for your encouragement to keep going on different stories.
- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Jan 25, 2006)
- Thanks Senior,
I am glad that you enjoyed the story.
Thank you for your encouragement to keep going on different stories.
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| Reviewer:
missymont
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Jan 24, 2006 |
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I registered just so I could rate your story. I'm not generally a fan of short stories that go on as long as yours, but it totally held my attention. The characters were well developed and it was not the run of the mill BDSM story that crops up on this site. It contrasted the beauty of a M/s relationship with the potentially ugly side very well. Keep up the good work. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Jan 25, 2006)
- Missymont,
Thank you so much for your kind words. I can't believe you registered just for my story! I appreciate your feedback and am intending to send in more stories soon.
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| Reviewer:
moosedsm
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Jan 23, 2006 |
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Well developed characters and story. Plot moved well, and most would enjoy it. I thought the flashbacks detracted a little and would like it better if the story moved in a more linier fashion.
Lite on the sex and bondage, or the girls reaction to them. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl
(Edit) (Jan 24, 2006)
- Thanks moosedsm for taking the time to review my story. It is the first time I have written a story of this type and really just did it for some fun. I will take your thoughts on board for my next story.
Aussiegirl
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