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Party Favors
Author: Zebulon
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(Added on Jan 5, 2006)
(This month 9954 readers) (Total 22170 readers) |
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Two women get free tickets to a Hypnosis show and get invited to a backstage party. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Elkor
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Jan 14, 2006 |
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Very nicely written. The character build-up probably could have been shortened in order to get to the "good stuff" but once it got going, the momentum kept up quite nicely, even with the scene changes. (8/10)
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bdsmbill
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Jan 9, 2006 |
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Hypnosis stories are pretty common, but this one is better than most. Good job. (7/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 6, 2006 |
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A fine little tale, with some cute ideas for the victim's thoughts. The end of the story is kind of sudden, but not bad.
Did studying get any easier for her? That's the least he could do in exchange for all the sex... (7/10)
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