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Maid Service
Author: Some Writer
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(Added on Jan 4, 2006)
(This month 51712 readers) (Total 67494 readers) |
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A maid finds the appreciation she deserves in an unlikely place |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Feb 8, 2006 |
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An interesting story, but where is the ending?
What is really going on at home? There are a few unanswered questions. . . (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Jan 7, 2006 |
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Good pacing, interesting plot, vivid and convincing. Spontaneity and carpe diem; thought and (ir)responsibility; chance and deliberate decisions. Mysteries remain and many questions open – excellent. Thank you very much!
I like the descriptions of what Elena does, what she feels, how the other reacts. When physically describing a male character it would be nice to include what makes him attractive in the other’s eyes (other than the fact that he is bound and available). Same thing with John the husband: he is, hopefully, entering a learning curve, showing Elena how much he wants and adores her. The story would be even better if it also showed what makes John desirable.
The written note is very endearing, polite and deferential. But – it also shows this young character’s inexperience. Instead of referring to his availability to serve the unknown woman’s pleasure, he only writes about his own fantasies and satisfaction. Tsk tsk.
P.S. apropos native European style, personally I love female and male characters who won’t succumb to pseudo-prepubescent depilation fetish madness at all. *Grumble grumble only place to remove any hair is a face, for those who don’t wear beards, the better to kiss you.* Okay, I’ll stop ranting about other people’s fetishes; it’s all good. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
somewriter
(Edit) (Jan 7, 2006)
- Thank you for your very detailed review Ranai. I must admit to suffering from being a man - it's tricky for me to describe why my male characters are attractive. Your high rating is much appreciated, thank you.
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| Reviewer:
Wistan
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Jan 5, 2006 |
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Well written and interesting story. Interesting setup, good action, and a realistic and interesting main character. Left me wanting to know more! (8/10)
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