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Wedding Night
Author: Zebulon
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(Added on Dec 21, 2005)
(This month 12411 readers) (Total 42159 readers) |
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A young woman meets and marries the man of her dreams. But he\'s got a big surprise for her on their wedding night. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 26, 2010 |
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Well written with some fingerlicking erotic scenes, I was rather taken aback by the clumsy 'twist'. It didn't work for me, because it is in fact confusing because without using names or further explanations, the so-called twist is in fact a major screw-up.
This, in combination with the consistent use of 'public' hair or area and a few other silly mistakes ("gentlemanliness" instead of "gentlemanship" and so on) made me initially grab for a seven rating. After having gone through the story again, I feel an eight is morte appropriate, given the above par writing. Also taking into consideration the pretty dam good 'sequel', "Learning Through The Night" by StillBehindBlueEyes, which lets this story make more sense...
A sure niner, should the twist have been done better and the story been longer...
Am off. Going to the Pubic Library.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
laursie
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Jan 7, 2006 |
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Loved the twist. Love your work. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chooky_104
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Jan 2, 2006 |
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I enjoyed the storyline even though it was a little predictible. The assumption that others would be posting this story all over the place (doubt it!!)and the Author making demands of free access annoyed me.. (7/10)
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bracemaiden
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Dec 28, 2005 |
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A bit slow in the beginning, but it picks up to an interesting second half. (9/10)
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longrover
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Dec 24, 2005 |
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Double date was good, but this is better -- nice twist. Thanks! (10/10)
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