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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
blue_moon
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Apr 20, 2010 |
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the story was very well written. I only had once an issue with the wording as it didn't fit into the timeframe. As the Author used the word "headlight". But other then this I very much enjoyed reading the story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jan 13, 2007 |
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Not a bad story, overall. Might use a little more suspense. Could use a little smoothing, for easier reading.
Also something I didn't see on first reading: there were no bras in the old west. Not invented yet. Nor were there deer in headlights, as there were not yet cars.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 22, 2006 |
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ok, but i was not aware the in the 19th century they were into sci-fi (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Dec 6, 2005 |
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A reasonable quality of writing, but the format could really have used some work.
The typeset was too small for easy viewing on a screen, and this contributed to the appearance of bloated paragraphs and too great a quantity of text visible at one time.
Use larger text, and break up your narrative - perhaps using spacing between paragraphs. Otherwise, quite adequate.
Not exactly my cup of tea content wise, and you could improve your vocabulary a little, but an enjoyable piece nonetheless. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
rob.wilson
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Nov 30, 2005 |
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ICK.
Interesting way to torture and kill someone, but a little to bloody and gory. Not that much erotic content. (4/10)
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