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Second Serving
Author: slave48
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(Added on Sep 18, 2005)
(This month 13092 readers) (Total 34797 readers) |
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Tony endures a day's slaving for his wife which becomes especially exciting when she springs a surprise. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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nice work (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Sep 20, 2005 |
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I agree with Warrior and Microwave0ven, this is delightful and well told. The glimpses of Angela’s and Tony’s thoughts and feelings give depth, suspense and sometimes humour to the imaginative antics. Personal favourite: the ‘tableau’. :-)
The only aspects I was not so thrilled with were the contrived ‘punishment’ pretexts, the formalistic scene dialogue, and the short episode of animal play – but those are merely personal preferences.
Definitely worthwhile reading, and sexy! Thank you slave48, and please write more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Warrior
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Sep 20, 2005 |
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Well written. The surprise twist at the end great. I remember learning in English years ago that a good short story has a twist at the end. I found this story quite enjoyable. (9/10)
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Microwave0ven
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Sep 19, 2005 |
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a very enjoyable read, good details and emotions conveyed by the descriptions. the suprise twist ending was had me laughing out loud. thank you for this story! hope to see more from you soon. (9/10)
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