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Another Approach
Author: Eden's Girl
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(Added on Sep 8, 2005)
(This month 8384 readers) (Total 22251 readers) |
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Rebecca is the unfortunate focus of Michael's attention. Rape in the moonlight. It's almost romantic, isn't it? Well, okay, maybe not. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 21, 2006 |
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not bad at all, something a bit different from what i have read in the past (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Sep 10, 2005 |
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BDSgirl said everything I intended to say. Short stories are tuff for charactor development and this on has it. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Eden's Girl
(Edit) (Sep 10, 2005)
- Thank you for your review ^^
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| Reviewer:
BDSgirl
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Sep 9, 2005 |
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i liked it. i thought for a short piece it moved along quite nicely, the writing was descriptive, the scene was set, there was enough character development to give it credibility. keep it up i say. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Eden's Girl
(Edit) (Sep 10, 2005)
- I'm glad you thought so. I think it's important for a story to be plausible before it can be any good, unless it's sci-fi or fantasy or whatever. Thanks for your review :)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Sep 9, 2005 |
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Violent, nasty, and everything the story code promised. Fairly well wrtten with a bit of charecter development (well the rapist anyway) not bad for a short piece. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Eden's Girl
(Edit) (Sep 10, 2005)
- Thanks!
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| Reviewer:
brittany heart
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Sep 8, 2005 |
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It was too violent. A sexual story must turn the reader on with a lot of description and minimum dialog (2/10)
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- Replied by:
Eden's Girl
(Edit) (Sep 8, 2005)
- I'm sorry, I wasn't aware of that rule.
- Replied by:
Eden's Girl
(Edit) (Sep 8, 2005)
- I'm curious: what exactly did you expect from a story that was given the story code "violent"?
Unfortunately, there is no code to express that a story is "too violent for brittany heart". Perhaps you should raise this issue on the forums or, better yet, be more careful what you read in future. You were warned, after all :)
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