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The Third Task
Author: Syren
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(Added on Sep 8, 2005)
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Jane's new Mistress orders her third big task. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
happi
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Dec 20, 2011 |
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more on jane"S task great stories hope there"S more to come ! (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 27, 2009 |
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Very well done. Personally, I would have made Ted a bit more stoïc, a tad more threatening in his demeanor. But that's me.
All in all, a great, interesting read.
JJ (9/10)
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bigcat
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Sep 18, 2006 |
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Well done. Extreme physical abuse not my personal cup, but the consent to submit to humiliation and even debasement is. Well done. Great series. Hope there's more. (9/10)
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Kira
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Nov 26, 2005 |
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Great story with a some new ideas, like them very much. (10/10)
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Ropetrick
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Oct 4, 2005 |
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Again a nice story, this time even more creative than before. Nicely done. (8/10)
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Zubisco
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Sep 11, 2005 |
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Superb. The tasks keep on getting more nastier. Great wholesome fun to read. I hope there are many more tasks in the future. (9/10)
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brittany heart
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Sep 11, 2005 |
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Absolutely superb, this story is worth six stars. More people should read your story. It’s absolutely mind blowing. Good Job!! (10/10)
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