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Daddy
Author: Str8s_erosislen
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(Added on Aug 17, 2005)
(This month 27635 readers) (Total 56381 readers) |
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Daddy helps His little girl stay a good little girl - just for Him. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 5, 2010 |
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Well written, good spelling and grammar. a nice slow build up and justifiable punishment to fit the crime :)
Come on now it is about time we had another chapter or two .... three? (9/10)
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charissa
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Aug 30, 2008 |
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I'd love more (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lila_Love
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Mar 27, 2007 |
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Exceptionally written. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
little_rose
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Apr 24, 2006 |
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good story.
ever thought of writing a sequel/ giving us more?
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 19, 2005 |
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A nicely done piece, well paced and happy. Interesting logical progression, obviously of a girl who has led a sheltered life. Congrats on a good read! (9/10)
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Belly
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Aug 19, 2005 |
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Nicely done. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mastersall
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Aug 19, 2005 |
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this is such a well crafted piece of erotic fiction.. i enjoyed how you slowly built it ... do hope that there will be other chapters where this girl will learn the proper way to behave (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Winnie
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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Very well written, making this story an easy read.
Look forward to more, lots more please. (9/10)
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