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Private Internment Author: Saturday Writer
(Added on Aug 9, 2005) (This month 59049 readers) (Total 77387 readers)
A slightly more easy going approach to the popular "prisoner in the future" story. Relies on a lot of geeky remote control goodness. Find out what happens when a guy with enough money to buy two former co-workers discovers he can have it all.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: DeGrinch (Edit) Rating: Jul 18, 2007
I really liked the basic idea here, and the control device was greate. The writing is very readable and character development good. (8/10)

Reviewer: Beelzebob (Edit) Rating: Sep 18, 2005
Incredible (10/10)

Reviewer: jameslakes (Edit) Rating: Aug 17, 2005
I got frustrated reading this by the constant running of words together without proper spacing. This should have been run through a grammar check, or just one last proof reading prior to submitting it. Interesting initial plot but the difficulty of reading it got in the way... (7/10)
Replied by: Saturday Writer (Edit) (Aug 10, 2005)
That's my fault for only sending a pdf file, which apparently was converted with some difficulty. I will send along a Word doc to the moderator. Hope that helps. In the mean time try the pdf file, it shouldn't have those errors.
SW

Reviewer: CrazyMe (Edit) Rating: Aug 14, 2005
I liked it a lot. It was cute and sexy at the same time. Well-written, except for the little problem with the lack of space - but as you already explained, we could just use the pdf. The characters were belivable and interesting. All in all a very enjoyable read. (9/10)

Reviewer: bdsmbill (Edit) Rating: Aug 12, 2005
Nice story. Well written. Too bad about the file conversion problem, but that is easily fixed. This was a good read. (9/10)

Reviewer: Engineer (Edit) Rating: Aug 12, 2005
A really good and entertaining story. Although long, it becomes never boring. The author made a very good piece out of a well-proven theme, and found the right mixture of erotic, disciplinary and captivation content. Just some proofreading ist recommended. (9/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Aug 11, 2005
found it just average (7/10)

Reviewer: castle2001 (Edit) Rating: Aug 11, 2005
Excellent story of a good length. (9/10)

Reviewer: Guiller (Edit) Rating: Aug 10, 2005
Only one word:MORE (10/10)

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