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She's My Bitch Now
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jul 27, 2005)
(This month 55395 readers) (Total 72041 readers) |
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Boss's Ex-wife and daughter shows up at work one day to make his secretary and him into their personal bitches. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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you are very consistant with all your stories, have read a few that did not cut it for me, butgenenraly you do a consistant job, which is what i like in writers (8/10)
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