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The Torturer
Author: Lord Douche
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(Added on Jun 28, 2005)
(This month 23900 readers) (Total 58274 readers) |
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The Torturers Guild is something that people do not talk about, and stories of people who survive a visit to their dungeons are things of legend, whispered in the dark corners of taverns across the city. A good Torturer never inflicts a permanent injury on their client, and with his reputation for being the best, Ayden is always given the most attractive prisoners lest their beauty be marred by another. Many females, young and old, have told him every last one of their secrets and left without a mark on them, and the newest prisoner knows that she will be no exception… |
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| Reviewer:
Katty101k
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Nov 29, 2015 |
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This is now my favorite story on this site. I made an account just to review it. It was wonderful. (10/10)
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SamCurious
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Jun 4, 2011 |
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hahaha you naughty boy!! glad you had some female input into the content. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Never was too keen on torture stories just for the torture, but the twist at the end brought my score from 7 to 8.
JJ (8/10)
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Mothbrad
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Mar 12, 2007 |
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A very sweet, romantic story that genuinely surprised even old jaded me! I think that the codes were spot on, actually, and although I avoid consensual stories (as a rule), this one was well worth getting into. I have to say that there were a couple of parts that sent a thrill right through me - the hungry girl in her cell, in particular. Hope to read more of your work in the future. (8/10)
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jip
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Feb 11, 2006 |
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Surprising story. It is perfect possible to write a sensual bdsm story without rough wordings, free brutalities. The author proves it (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 28, 2005 |
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wish the mouse would move by itself, hard to keep going when you have to stop yourself to scroll down (10/10)
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Samantha
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Jul 19, 2005 |
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I really enjoyed reading this story. The imagery portrayed enabled me to visualise the situations occuring very clearly. I find that style of writing more relaxing to read. The flow of the plot from begining to end, was very smooth, again making it an easy, and enjoyable read. (9/10)
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Ruby
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Jul 12, 2005 |
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Fabulous story. The Torturer is one hot dom. Thanks! (9/10)
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Blue_Monday
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Jul 5, 2005 |
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Fabulous! Thank you! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2005)
- My pleasure! Thanks for the review!
LD
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| Reviewer:
Jaqualine
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Jul 4, 2005 |
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A very enjoyable story! This is exactly the type of story that keeps me fascinated and glued to the words. I enjoyed the serious and professional way Ayden handled himself and the sudden turn of events in the end. I also think it was wise to end it where you did, because now what happens next with Elizabeth and Ayden is up to the reader. I will read more of your works! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2005)
- Thank you for the review, Jaqualine! I'm glad you like where I ended the story. This was more of a departure from my usual genre, but I hope you enjoy my other writings.
LD
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fatpig
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Jul 2, 2005 |
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Great piece of work, highly enjoyable (8/10)
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Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2005)
- Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it.
LD
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Masterdesire
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Jul 1, 2005 |
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Shame that its a one part only. It has great potential. Excellent composition. I enjoyed it immensely . Wouldn't mind reading it over again another time. (9/10) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2005)
- Thank you for the review, Masterdesire! I'm glad you liked it.
LD
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subbunny
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Jul 1, 2005 |
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I almost didn't read this because of the codes. I agree it was difficult to classify. I really enjoyed the story, but thought it could have been a bit more drawn out, with more implements used than just the flogger. I think it would make a great romantic story with them continuing to meet and him pushing her harder and harder each time. I will definately read your other stories (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 1, 2005)
- It took me half an hour to work out the codes for this! I could have made it longer, yes, but I thought it would be better to leave the rest of it to the imagination.
Thank you for your review, subbunny :)
LD
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Grey Slayer
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Jul 1, 2005 |
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Very enjoyable. I liked the psychological aspects of breaking her, the mind games he plays before things begin to get rough. Please continue this story. (10/10)
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Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 1, 2005)
- The mind games were a lot of fun to write, and I'm glad you appreciate them :) I've thought about continuing the story since nearly everyone wants me to. If it ever happens, it'll be a seperate story. This one stands alone, and the way I ended it doesn't work if just I add another chapter.
Thanks for the review!
LD
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caillag
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Jun 30, 2005 |
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I truly enjoyed the story. The plotline was believable, with enough details to submerge the reader in the story. Thank you for writing this story. I will definitely read your other stories.
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 1, 2005)
- Thank you for reviewing it, caillag :) I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. This one is probably a departure from my usual genre, but I still hope you like my other work.
LD
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headhunter
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Jun 30, 2005 |
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Very well constructed, and very well written. I admite the certain level of restraint (pun not intended) and the subtle suggestions of the society beyond the story. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 1, 2005)
- Thanks for the review, headhunter! Glad you liked it.
LD
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LoKi Kat
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Jun 30, 2005 |
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I very much enjoyed this. It was a nice twist at the end, and very well written. Hope to read more from you (not on this story necessarily, but, on others :) ) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2005)
- Glad you liked it, LoKi Kat! :) Thanks for the review.
LD
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| Reviewer:
DJ Tuk
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Jun 29, 2005 |
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Very good - liked the theme - is there more? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jun 29, 2005)
- Thanks for the review, DJ Tuk!
As much as I would like to (I enjoyed it too!), it is unlikely I will write any more. I created it as a story, and I ended it exactly where I wanted to. Any attempt to continue it wouldn't be right, if you understand what I mean.
LD
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BDSgirl
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Jun 29, 2005 |
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well LD, i certainly enjoyed it! is there more to cum from Elizabeth and Ayden? i like the quandry Ayden finds himself in, and also would look forward to his discovery of Dominance as such,if that is what is happening. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jun 29, 2005)
- Thanks for the review, BDSgirl!
This is one of those stories where whilst it would love to continue it, it was made as a short story, and so I'll have to say no, there will be no continuation of this story. You'll have to leave the rest to your imagination! :)
LD
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