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The Next Step
Author: Syren
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(Added on Jun 3, 2005)
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A newly married couple decide to take the next step into sadism. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 19, 2006 |
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has the beginnings of a very good story (8/10)
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kaleun76
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Jan 23, 2006 |
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Very nice story. Fast plot development, but not too fast.
I hope there is more (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
oldwino
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Dec 18, 2005 |
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very good start to a story. could use word or such to improve. plot is great. will sve this as favourite. my young gf(38) will love it, when can we expect more? (8/10)
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BigCat
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Jul 22, 2005 |
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Good one. Highly imaginative. Well done. Would like to see more on this one. (9/10)
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Dododecapod
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Jun 14, 2005 |
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Good one. The woman's descent into uncontrolled submission is a bit quick, and I have to admit, her clear enjoyment of the process breaks the suspension of disbelief a bit. And "Jo" isn't very imaginative. Otherwise, quite good. (6/10)
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rce
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Jun 10, 2005 |
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Well written, but not my kind of story (I like monogamous relationships). (6/10)
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jbowler65
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Jun 10, 2005 |
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This was a very interesting story that we are looking forward to reading more. (8/10)
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gnome
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Jun 6, 2005 |
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What next? Waiting with expertations.
keep it up very good twists in the story (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lindalooking
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Jun 5, 2005 |
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Yes it was very well written, but almost an exact copy of J's well written Storyteller (also posted on BDSM Library. No points for creatively here. I mean come on, meet on line after loving someones story, take a taxi to his house, etc, etc. It's a shame since there are so many ways you can write a similar story, no excuse for copying someone else effort. (1/10)
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feelfree2mailme
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Jun 5, 2005 |
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Very Nice,
Please write more. If u need any ideas, feelfree2mailme...lol (10/10)
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xezeras
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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love this story.mostly because it is about my favorite subject,wives being abused by other men.it was very well written with very few errors.i could tell the author was as excited to be writting it as i was to be reading it.i am looking forward to updates . (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bobanddianne
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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Fascinating story line. Well presented and with many openings for future development. We eagerly look forward to future chapters.
Cheers,
Bob & dianne (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
rainbow001
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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Very nice. Looking forward to the continuation. (8/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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Very good. I look forward to more of this story. (7/10)
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