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Whore 94
Author: Fronker
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(Added on May 28, 2005)
(This month 90273 readers) (Total 195757 readers) |
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Behind the banal monotony of everyday existence there lies another world - a world ruled by the privileged for the privileged. A world into which I was introduced - to play my part - though not as one of the privileged, but as a whore... |
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littleone__
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Dec 6, 2011 |
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a smile and my rating says it all. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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This is one of those stories whre the whole feel is just right, where the balance between the unthinkable and the reluctant willingness to close the eyes and step into the dark, feels just right, where the balance between utter shock and witheld acceptance, feels just right, where the balance between shame and exitement feel just right, where the balance of the struggle between "No" to "Yes" is just right, where the balance between mortification and total abandon feels just right, and, finally, I realize I just wrote an incredible long sentence.
But the story is awesomly superb.
JJ (10/10)
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Polecat
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Apr 16, 2008 |
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Outstanding. The writing is first class. The story premise original. Elizabeth's character well developed.
I would run out of superlatives to use if I tried to do it justice.
Now; seriously: What happened to the previous Whore 04? (10/10)
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ssara
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Oct 5, 2006 |
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This story is absolutely incredible. It looks like no new chapters have been added in awhile so it may be done, but one can dream that this incredible piece of writing and erotica will continue until all the questions about Whore94 have been asnwered. (10/10)
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gentleman
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Feb 19, 2006 |
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one of my favorite stories.
I hope the author writes more - or a new story - soon. (10/10)
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agmlb95
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Feb 17, 2006 |
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Astounding. I love it; Elizabeth's overwhelming regret adds a nice touch of pathos that is missing from most stories but adds to the eroticism of the text. This (10) would be a nice last episode, but I wouldn't object to more. But please keep writing. (10/10)
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ghost
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Dec 4, 2005 |
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Very nice. Even though this is the second time I'm reading this, I still enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for taking the care to edit such that the flow of the story isn't interrupted by any bad grammar. And now, if you'd excuse me, I have to go put a delighful end to what your story has started within me, all the while keeping firmly in mind certain scenes and lines from your story. (9/10)
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Nov 30, 2005 |
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This one goes on my bookshelf for sure! Looking forward to reading and rereading it again and again!
(Reviewed with a huge erection)
Too bad you can only go up to 10. This story ranks with the best on this site. My only complaint is the length of time betweee episodes. Keep up the excellent writing!
After reading the 8th chaper, I'll still give it a 10 although I'm not into lesbianism. Looking forward to more training. (10/10)
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nikita
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Nov 28, 2005 |
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The worst thing I could say about this story is I found 1 typo the third time I read through it. Tsk, tsk. Writing a story in the first person is very challenging and this author did it perfectly. The self deprecating humor was right on. The hot factor, an 8, but the humiliation ingredient is a definite 10. Can't fault the author for providing a little more substance than heat. After all, it would be too humiliating. I'd like another helping please.
Thank you for this Training chapter. Alas, it does NOT sate the hunger. (10/10)
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od4os
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Oct 16, 2005 |
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Very pleasant story. I loved the part when she opens her mouth and waggles her tongue greedily waiting for him to cum. More humiliation and degradation for Elizabeth please. :) (9/10)
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ssprin
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Oct 10, 2005 |
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Keep it coming. I love her descent. (9/10)
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rilawild
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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This is an excellent story. Very erotic and very well written. I love the way that Elizabeth's humiliation and greed are played off against each other as she slides deeper and deeper. (10/10)
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LittleBrownBear
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Oct 4, 2005 |
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I loved this story. There was cruelty without viciousness. I'm almost envious of whore94! The character has just the right amount of 'naivete' and the slow realisation that she really does love being a whore is very well done. I hope we will be reading more about her exploits very soon. Thank you for writing such a great story. (10/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 9, 2005 |
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Very good story. We await to see how far she will go in accepting her humiliation. (10/10)
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H Dean
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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Quite a good tale. I have been intending on posting a review for quite some time and have been unable to do so until now. The worst thing I can say about this story is that it is grammatically sound. the best is that it is quite erotic - more than most stories I have read.
I hope to see more to this tale - a further sinking into her role and humiliation - though I suspect it has come to an end. (9/10)
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oliveroflondon
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Aug 10, 2005 |
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A very well written story about an unusual Club in Mayfair (one that I would cetainly like to join!). I look forward to finding out how Elizabeth comes to become one of the Club's ladies.
Upgraded this to 10/10 after reading Episode 5. Tremendous (10/10)
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qwert
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Aug 9, 2005 |
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Good story, kept my interest till the end. Reminds me a similar story (in 2 parts): Swallow Your Pride by corvus101, who has a hotmail account. (7/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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Excellent story! Well written with few errors and plot you can follow! Thanks! I am looking forward to see what the new whore does next. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (Feb 19, 2006)
- Poor girl ... she just keeps sinking further and further into the depths of depravity!!
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BigCat
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Jul 19, 2005 |
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Very well done. Diificult motif, one's choosing self-debasement and humiliation as opposed to the "blackmail" theme. On my shelf. Thanks. (10/10)
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Ruby
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Jul 17, 2005 |
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Very enjoyable tale. Am looking forward to what happens next! (9/10)
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drzyzga
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Jul 13, 2005 |
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Macht Lust auf mehr.
Die Spannung ist unerträglich.
Nicht zu schwer geschrieben. (9/10)
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slutsteph
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Jun 21, 2005 |
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The author has excellent timing! The story just keeps getting hotter and hotter! (9/10)
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BloodBitch
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Jun 12, 2005 |
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Amazing story. Can't wait for the next installment. (10/10)
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littleone_
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Jun 2, 2005 |
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The story was awesome. Fonker not only can write erotically but he (or she) can get into the mind of girl who is obviously going to turned as whore like nothing I have ever read before. Trust me on this, I know from first hand experience what it is like to made into a whore and Fonker it telling it like it is. I can hardly wait to see what comes next. (10/10)
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RhondaLee
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Jun 1, 2005 |
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The idea of a woman topping other sub at the beginning is very new. This is probably the first time I read an idea like this.
However, future plots shouldn't be reviewed at the earlier part of the story, in my opinion. (9/10)
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scandalous pleasure
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May 31, 2005 |
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Very very well-written. Excellent pacing. Maintains tone very well. And hot. (8/10)
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kring
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May 30, 2005 |
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Cool story. Please continue. (9/10)
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woolfighter
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May 29, 2005 |
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Good start, dont lose track. (9/10)
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LordVetinari
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May 28, 2005 |
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An interesting beginning. Where will the author go with it? I am curious to see. (8/10)
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mikoyan
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May 28, 2005 |
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I liked it so far.... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
flux
(Edit) (Mar 3, 2006)
- Chapters 11 & 12 here
http://masterjackstories.com/wp/fronker/whore-94/
- Replied by:
flux
(Edit) (Mar 3, 2006)
- Chapters 11 & 12 here
http://masterjackstories.com/wp/fronker/whore-94/
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