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Paradise
Author: Deputy Duffy
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(Added on May 18, 2005)
(This month 51312 readers) (Total 64670 readers) |
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Invaders turn an ordinary Saturday into an adventure. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 29, 2008 |
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loved it, buti enojy allyour work (10/10)
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Sabrina
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Mar 31, 2006 |
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Not exactly rape but a good story and an original concept, competently [if a little confusingly] executed. Even more detail would have been nice, but no one got beaten or tortured, no one got called 'slut', and best of all, no one got called 'master' [all these themes are a total turn-off for me] and ultimately, a lovely time was had by one and all. Reading this story was a refreshing and pleasantly erotic interlude that I thoroughly enjoyed. Well done Duffy, and 'thank you'. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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May 20, 2005 |
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Intriguing premise. The "house invasion" storyline (and it's variations) has been around for awhile, but this is better than most. The revelation of the setup at the end was very well done, coming as a quite inspired surprise. (And the Denouement was refreshingly evil!)
Your writing is quite technically good; no spelling mistakes, good grammar.
I WOULD have liked to see a little F/f; Psycho would have made a good dominant. But given the surprise, I quite understand why that wasn't in the cards. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
tamiesplayhouse
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May 19, 2005 |
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enjoyable,not alot of action, a good story (8/10)
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max31uk
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May 18, 2005 |
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Well Duffy, another great story. I always look out for your work - consistently perverse, I'm surprised you don't get more feedback. The only author I can think of in a similar vein is Loki. (9/10)
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