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The Cave Author: Nist Shadow
(Added on May 18, 2005) (This month 52745 readers) (Total 68164 readers)
Maybe revisitng that cave was a bad idea, but at least it seem to be an interesting bad idea.

Ratings and Reviews:
Number of Ratings: 13
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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: Kira (Edit) Rating: Jun 20, 2005
realy great story, i like the changeover from the selfbondage part to domination part. Specialy the permanent bondage with the rifets gun is a nice idea. Would be intersted what's coming next. (10/10)

Reviewer: skullchaser (Edit) Rating: Jun 2, 2005
Nice start! I can't wait to see where you go with it, and what sort of tortures you dream up for the character to endure. You should break up the paragraphs a bit, rather than have large blocks of text. Otherwise, very imaginative beginning. (8/10)

Reviewer: Zeferage (Edit) Rating: May 30, 2005
I agree with most of what the other reviews say, a very enjoyable story. More information on the characters would be nice. I do not understand why in the story codes 'feet' was marked. (8/10)

Reviewer: DJ Tuk (Edit) Rating: May 30, 2005
Short and good. It would be nice if there was some more (9/10)

Reviewer: jbowler65 (Edit) Rating: May 22, 2005
This was a very enjoyable concept to (hopefully) a beginning of a longer story. However, it would be nice to have some more details, especially about the characters. (8/10)

Reviewer: Mad Lews (Edit) Rating: May 21, 2005
An imaginative concept, fairly good descriptions of some relatively complex mechanisms, A bit more character development might be nice. And as you've already heard incessantly a proof reader would help. Carry on we await your next missive. (8/10)

Reviewer: bracemaiden (Edit) Rating: May 20, 2005
I agree with the rest of the reviewers - there's a wonderful '10' rating story burried in there. Unfortunately, the grammar oops'es make it difficult to follow. I'ld suggest a proof-reader. (8/10)

Reviewer: bobanddianne (Edit) Rating: May 19, 2005
A very nice and charming concept, we are eagerly looking forward to future developments (9/10)

Reviewer: TzA (Edit) Rating: May 18, 2005
I enjoyed this story al lot, but it would be nice if you were al litte more descriptive and wrote more...
I hope there will be more chapters... (8/10)

Reviewer: Grey Slayer (Edit) Rating: May 18, 2005
Very enjoyable. There were a few spelling/grammar errors, I very much liked this story. The concept just grabs my imagination. Please continue. (8/10)

Reviewer: Dododecapod (Edit) Rating: May 18, 2005
A worthwhile start. Your writing is very sparse; in fact, a tad TOO sparse. It's like someone's notes, not a finished document.
That said, your imagery is good, and there sems to be the kernal of something really interesting here. If you can just remember your conjunctions and do a little self editing, the next chapter (I'm assuming there will be a next chapter, this ends abruptly) should be well worth reading. (5/10)

Reviewer: praetorian (Edit) Rating: May 18, 2005
A nice start... now, let's see how it goes on (7/10)

Reviewer: Engineer (Edit) Rating: May 18, 2005
A nice story. The idea is not quite new, but neatly developed, with a surprising twist in the end, and told in good taste, bringing a dense atmosphere. But a revision to eliminate certain stylistic and spelling flaws would improve readability.
(7/10)

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