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Retiring the Wife
Author: Rocky
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(Added on Apr 29, 2005)
(This month 17620 readers) (Total 33540 readers) |
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A lifelong slave/wife is displaced in her husband's bed by her daughter, who is expected to continue a family tradition. There's really no actual sex here, but I hope you enjoy it anyway. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pejanon
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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Another gem from Rocky!
(No-sex? That's rich!)
This story is appalling, tantalizing, highly touching and beautiful in its twisted, dark way. I still have a lump in my throat! Yes, in my THROAT - this is real heart-grabber (No-sex. Right!) A topsy-turvy romance.
I suppose 'no-sex (hah) refers to the fact that scenes are not done 'in detail'. That is exactly as it should be in the story like this. So carefully crafted in so a few words!
(Now if author could be convicted to put in some MORE words - Where is that 11? No 11? Too bad!)
No-sex? (That is the most misleading teaser of the year!)
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Jul 17, 2005)
- Again, thanks. I write a lot, publish very little. I have several projects going on right now, though, and perhaps I'll get around to getting more stuff posted. The length was a concern of mine as well, but as someone much wiser than myself told me, the mind is the most powerful sex organ there is. I wanted to simply paint a picture, and let the reader see what he or she wanted to see.
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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May 3, 2005 |
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Nicely done. I liked the emphasis being placed
on the mental/psychological aspects, rather
than the "wham-bam" description that is the
entire content of so many stories these days. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (May 4, 2005)
- Thank you for the review. I believe I'm better at describing the physical layout and emotions of the players than I am at writing the mechanics of sex, so I thought I'd develop the scene and leave the rest up to the reader. Glad you enjoyed it.
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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May 2, 2005 |
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Odd, but entertaining. I don't personally get the whole unbathed thing, myself, as I like my slave clean and attractive. Naethaless, a kinky and erotic story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (May 3, 2005)
- I feel the same way about cleanliness, but wanted to emphasize the "property" rather than "person" aspect. In addition, the humiliation factor of being unable to bathe after sex was in the back (front?) of my mind. Again, thank you for the review...they do provide encouragement to me!
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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May 1, 2005 |
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It is hard to do such a good story, in such short space.
It is really good, hot, despite the sex being imagined rather than exhiobited; or perhaps because of that. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (May 3, 2005)
- Thanks for the review. I thought I'd try my hand at something shorter than what I've already published. As for the implication, rather than description, of the sexual activity...the mind is truly the most powerful sex organ there is, IMHO.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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nice job. It would be nice if you carried on with the story, showing how things went. The selling of the mother, the birth(s) of kids, and their training (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Apr 30, 2005)
- Thanks for the reply...they are really appreciated, particularly when they include either suggestions for the story line or how to improve the writing itself.
Actually, it was meant as a stand-alone story, and I doubt if I will continue it.
I'm trying to get away from the longer, multi-chapter works...but I do have two of those in the works right now. I don't know if I'll ever publish them, or if I do, when they'll be posted, though.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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was ok, no big thrils however (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Apr 30, 2005)
- Like I said, it was just someing that had been bouncing around in my head. Thanks for the comment; they're always appreciated.
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