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The Judge Molests His New Orphans
Author: Powerone
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(Added on Apr 7, 2005)
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The Judge adopts three orphans, 2 girls age 10 and 13 and a boy age 12 in the early 1930's. He intends to exploit them sexually for his friends and himself. |
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| Reviewer:
mister0100
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Oct 31, 2005 |
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please add new chapters. (9/10)
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Engineer
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Jul 28, 2005 |
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Sexual acts with children are always atrocious, and there should be a border not to cross even for fantasy literature. Additionally, this story shows such a disregard for the victims, that I am not willing to even read more than the beginning. The author is blessed with a good creative potential, but unfortunately his work is unscrupulous and does not develop to more ripeness. Would you want to have your children treated in such a way?
Now I'm awaiting your next tit-for-tat-answer, Powerone. (1/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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So, you blame the child for being molested? (4/10)
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Dododecapod
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Jul 21, 2005 |
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As twisted and evil as I have grown to expect from you, Powerone. Good time placement, though, you haven't used much in the way of artifacts of the period; given it seems to be a small town in the US, horses and stables would still be prominent, and gas lights are not out of the question (both of which give ME some interesting ideas)...
If I have any complaints, it's the lack of background (ARE we in the US? Is the Judge's place a large house, or a mansion? If the latter, are there grounds?) and a slight one regarding puctuation, in that you seem to drop your apostrophes a bit.
Still, I'm being a bit picky. This is a great start, and I'm sure my questions will be answered in the next few parts.
Just read part two, and the photography scene was just AMAZING! I am truly awed by the sheer sexuality of your writing. Please, keep this series going! Even if you only publish a chapter every few months, I will wait with bated breath for the next installment! (10/10)
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Softglobes
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May 6, 2005 |
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Ignore all those sanctimonious prigs and their anti-child sex cliches. If it's truly consensual it's ok with me, anyhow, it's only fantasy - I thought it was an excellent read and look forward to the next instalment. The plot was realistic, the characters were plausible, descriptions excellent. I had to go out and buy a new box of tissues! (10/10)
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Ruby
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Apr 15, 2005 |
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All the elements of a great Powerone story are here...and if the children were aged 18 and up I'd come back for more. (8/10)
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substeph
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Apr 9, 2005 |
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I loved this story, it has everything that I have come to love about your other writings. I hope that you will continue it. (9/10)
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Jacen
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Apr 9, 2005 |
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Not bad at all. I could do without the m/m content, but oh well.
And yes, the site has two categories- teen and young. Many people use them interchangably, but they shouldnt. (8/10)
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bisarah
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Apr 8, 2005 |
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i didn't realize that this site published kiddie porn. i won't be back! it is a sickness and should not be encouraged. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Powerone
(Edit) (Apr 9, 2005)
- You seem to have all of a sudden found a dislike for kiddie porn. I looked at your reviews and found this on 3/12/05. When you give a story a 1 because you don't like the subject matter you went from a reviewer to a censor.
Sarah’s Punishment By Max Smart
This story contains non-consensual, severe, and sexualized treatment of a minor. It is strictly a sexual fantasy. In real life I abhor ANY non-consensual activity, sexual or otherwise, in particular when minors may be involved.
Reviewer: bisarah (Edit)
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Mar 12, 2005
baby did a bad, bad thing? i just discovered this story today ... i hope you will add to it! it was well-written and there was humiliation ... (9/10)
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Irb784
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Apr 7, 2005 |
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I find this story very concerning in the current climate, considering the Jackson trial. Particularly as the author mixes up his pronouns and uses "I" instead of "He". Whilst I accept forced sex as a legitimate topic for fantasy writing, I find paedophilia difficult to accept as a legitimate topic to harbour as fantasy. Next time it needs proof reading too, the grammar and spelling are both poor, not to mention the previously referred to Freudian slips as regards to pronouns. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
Powerone
(Edit) (Apr 7, 2005)
- And it is pedophilia to be correct.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 7, 2005 |
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Very well done. While I have read only one maybe two M/m or M/b Stories, I would love to see how this will progress (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Apr 7, 2005 |
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I am not a fan of incestious behavior but the story was excellent. (7/10)
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MasterRJ
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Apr 7, 2005 |
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Boy would I hate to be that guy...
Actually I'm not one for the whole male dom thing, but I just skipped over Bill's torture...and hey, a sex offender him self...it's funny. He desserves it. What a wonderful twist. The stuff with Grace is pure gold though. Nice story Powerone...keep it coming! (9/10)
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