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Ring of Truth Blog
Author: obohobo
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(Added on Mar 14, 2005)
(This month 125207 readers) (Total 159538 readers) |
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When clearing an old attic Derek finds a ring and a notebook. Wearing the ring gives him to the power to read the thoughts of others and make them answer questions completely truthfully. The notebook tells of a previous owner's experiences with the ring over two centuries previously. Derek decides to publish his observations on wearing the ring interspersed with those in the notebook as a series of 'blogs'. |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 7, 2006 |
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Remarkable story. The "Ring" is used as a "tool" for the description of the toughts and caracter. If it would exist I believe a lot of things would change in the world and perhaps there would be less hypocrites! The only remark I could give is that some paragraphs or parts a a little long and too extensive, but still although this remark I believe it is worth a 10! (10/10)
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GaelstormIRA
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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The length of paragraphs destroyed the story for me. Otherwise it wasn't too bad. (5/10)
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Kingcodez
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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It's been awhile since someone reviewd this so: Great Story. It's really came along far since the first few chapters. I love how the characters are turning out and the different scenes in the story.
Great Job. (10/10)
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CrazyMe
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May 29, 2005 |
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Great story. You can always expect some interesting stories from obohobo. The plot is good and so is the language. The characters are believeable. I like it a lot. (9/10)
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Azazel
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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Nice Story, I like the concept and its always refreshing to read something with a novel take. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Mar 23, 2005 |
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A very different and refreshing story. Very good pace, but it keeps you wanting more. We can't wait to read more. (9/10)
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Alex Bragi
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Mar 17, 2005 |
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I simply love it when I think I’ve come across just about every sex scene and theme, and then come across something, like this, that’s so different and intriguingly good. It had me hooked from the start. The writing is clear and precise. The descriptions and back-story are relevant and well executed—‘ feed’ at a good pace to paint a clear mental picture but without seeming to clutter or distract from the main story. The characters’ dialog is crisp and believable—again nothing too overdone—just clear voices in my head. My only complaint is that it seemed to cut off rather suddenly in the last paragraph. It felt almost as if the author had a deadline to keep, and had to close the story/chapter off in a hurry, or, maybe I just wanted more?
If you’re looking for something tacky to have a quick wank with, you probably should back click now. If you’re looking for something to entertain; if you enjoy the sheer pleasure of good writing as much as anything sexual in a story, you shoudn’t go past this one.
(9/10)
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Mad Lews
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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A good start with a unique idea. I'm sure you realize you've only scratched the surface and your readers will expect much more in the near future. But no pressure, honest, keep up the great writing (9/10)
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darklace
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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It's refreshing to read a story with a mind-control theme that isn't jeuvenile. It's also nice to have a female character who seems like a whole, beautiful person instead of a set of measurements and a hair color. Nicely done, please do continue the story. (8/10)
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MstrThor
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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Good start. Would like to see more (7/10)
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