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Orgasm Control
Author: robbermagnet
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(Added on Mar 14, 2005)
(This month 34432 readers) (Total 68380 readers) |
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She is awakened to be controlled. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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BigCat
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Aug 6, 2005 |
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Really a good read. (10/10)
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delish
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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I don't know how I missed this story before now! I love it, mostly because of the fact that it so very closely resembles the relationship between my Dom and myself... The fact that the feel is so familiar to me just adds to the eroticism. Excellent, excellent work. It's highly recommended. (9/10)
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Rocky
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Mar 18, 2005 |
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Excellent exploration of the emotional state of the narrator, and a wonderful example of how the mind truly is the greatest sex organ. A solid 9.5, but given a 10 by me for two reasons: no half-points possible, and to make up in part for the 6 someone else gave. (10/10)
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mystymason
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Mar 18, 2005 |
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Damn, it's hard to type with one hand. Great story! (9/10)
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LordVetinari
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Mar 18, 2005 |
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My only complaint is that it doesn't have more torture, but then, the author never promised that. He delivered exactly what he promised, with a great feel of verisimilitude. Rock on! (7/10)
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kemosabe
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Mar 17, 2005 |
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Ranks with the very best on this site. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 18, 2005)
- Wow. Thanks!
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| Reviewer:
kira9871
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Mar 17, 2005 |
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Thanks so much for another wonderful story to read. I love the mental and emotional control the Dom has over the sub in your stories. Your a wonderful writer. Please keep it up, I would especially love another one from the Doms point of view, those are the hottest for me. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 18, 2005)
- Thanks for the feedback! Writing from the dom's point of view was a bit of a challenge. Good to hear you think it worked.
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ProjectEuropa
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Mar 17, 2005 |
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As a viginette, you have written a tour de force. If you can sustain the superb quality of writing in a longer format, you will have something special indeed. You have a novella screaming to be written here. The only criticism that can be aimed at this piece is its shortness of length, though I am sure there are magazines that would prize this piece as it is. (9/10)
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hels
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Mar 17, 2005 |
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I loved the emotional input from the sub and the downstated mastery of the Dom, a good D/s story does not always have to contain violence the mental and sexual stimulation is just as exciting. Good job, will read more of your work soon. (8/10)
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robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 18, 2005)
- Thanks for taking the time to comment. I agree that a good D/s story doesn't have to be violent.
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Mad Lews
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Mar 16, 2005 |
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Very erotic, a pipping hot story that's well told and not pretentious in the least.
You have a very sincere and realistic style
(9/10)
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robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 18, 2005)
- That's flattering. Thanks for the review.
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mastersall
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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Great tale.. well done and could very well be the beginning of a longer tale..Loved it ! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2005)
- Thanks for reading and reviewing another of my stories. I appreciate the comments.
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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a hot little story. it was very well written. i hope you will continue it ... (8/10)
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- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2005)
- Thanks for taking the time to read and review the story. I appreciate it.
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| Reviewer:
pechho
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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Simple perfect. Right speed. Great langauge. I'd love to read more of this style. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2005)
- Thanks for the review, especially the interesting comment about the speed. I'll have to give that some more thought.
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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Absolutely excellent. Both domination and eroticism, without having to resort to any restraints or violence. Decent and skilled wording. There's a feeling of power as well as of devotion and desire. (10/10)
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robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2005)
- Thanks for the very specific comments. I appreciate them.
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| Reviewer:
darklace
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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No more is needed. It's not short, it's exactly as long as it needs to be. It's not just erotic, it's sensual in a primal way. An excellent story, bravo. (9/10)
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robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2005)
- Wow. Thanks.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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I realy hope you add more to the story, love the way it was layed out and written (9/10)
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- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2005)
- Thanks for the review. I did try making it longer, but it seemed contrived and artificial. I might try adding chapters, however.
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| Reviewer:
AndrewBlack
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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That was hot! Fantastic short story, flows beautifully, effortless style and horny as hell. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2005)
- Thanks for the compliments. They make me want to write another story.
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| Reviewer:
faith
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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*Grin* i love the dynamics between these characters. His Power is very controlled and precise. The Power of her submission is the wild ride of the storm… * grin* he holds a tornado in the palm of his hand…that willingly dances to his tune....bravo! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2005)
- Thanks for reading the story and taking the time to comment. The reviews mean a lot.
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