|
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 18 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 6% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
6% |
33% |
56% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (10/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (1/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Maitre1962
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Nov 30, 2007 |
| |
What the heck has happened to the story??? All there is is the title and nothing else!!!!! (1/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
delish
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Oct 30, 2005 |
| |
The thing I loved the most about this story is that it hits so close to home. It is -very- much set in the real world, and in a way that is astoundingly beautiful. I'd even go so far as to say it's a sweet story. It reminds me of my relationship, and helps me remember just how lucky I am. Specifically, the attention to the psyche of the partner is one of the first things that attracted me to my Dom. It seems to be a rare talent, though I will say it's not always for lack of trying... anyway, it's lovely. You absolutely MUST continue writing, RM. You have a gift for cutting to the core without being boring in any way. (10/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
kaitie
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 19, 2005 |
| |
This is the stuff that fantasies are made of...
Bravo. (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 19, 2005)
- Thanks for the review Katie.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 15, 2005 |
| |
they do not get much better then this, please keep writing stories like these (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
kira9871
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 12, 2005 |
| |
Thank you so much for giving this amazing story to read. I read stories online all the time and this was without question the best one I have ever read. It was breath takingly beautiful. While reading it the rest of the world fell away. Coming online has made me jaded, but you have reminded me where my submission comes from and how beautiful it really is. (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 12, 2005)
- I'm speechless. Thank you for the review and the amazing compliment.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
albear
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 7, 2005 |
| |
I really enjoyed this story, and I liked the detail about how the dom was feeling as well, it made it kind of even sided (as opposed to lopsided... nah, one sided). I maybe could've done without the yeast infection part though! Overall very well written, excellent characters. I really enjoyed it :o) (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2005)
- The yeast infection didn't do it for you, huh? Thanks for taking the time to read and review it.
- Replied by:
faith
(Edit) (Mar 8, 2005)
- I hate to disagree but I think I need to. Regarding the infection, in my opinion, it is a wonderful detail. It tells me that this Dom knows his sub... body and soul. This kind of attention to detail projects an aura of intimacy that has little to do with sex but everything to do with D/s. This is a story that touches on the cornerstone of bdsm...safe, sane and consensual. The synopsis for this story is 'He knows what she needs' but the only way he can really do that is if he knows her. It's the small details with-in the story that helps the reader judge the truth of this author's claim… and in this case... the story lives up to the promise. He does know what she needs and gives it to her in spades...*grin* and if it's bad form to comment on another's reveiw I do apologize...
- Replied by:
albear
(Edit) (Mar 8, 2005)
- No, I don't mind you replying :o) I guess I just see candida alberticans as a detail I don't necessarily enjoy in my erotic readings, but yes, I guess it does lend to showing the intimacy between the two. I still don't like it, but you're never going to please everyone. I did enjoy the story overall and I said that. :o)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
faith
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 6, 2005 |
| |
I liked this story a lot. It reached inside me and touched the submissive who lives there... I think you put a very human face on these characters. I love the fact that the Dom is not always comfortable with what he does but he doesn't let it stop him because He knows it fills a need in His submissive. Very well written... I hope to read more about this couple...*grin* soon! (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 6, 2005)
- Faith, thank you for reviewing the story. I like that you mentioned something specific (the dom's discomfort), because it's always nice to know what works in a story.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
theargonaut
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 4, 2005 |
| |
Excellent writing style, made me want to know more about the characters and their history with one another. Manages to be hardcore without being vulgar. A job well done! (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 5, 2005)
- Another first time reviewer! Sounds like you want more character development. I admit, I'm curious about their relationship too. Thanks for your comments.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mastersall
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 4, 2005 |
| |
tale moves at a great pace and totally engrosses one.. well done (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 5, 2005)
- Wow. You have reviewed one story, and you chose mine. Thank you. I'm flattered, and I appreciate the comments.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
maiasub
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 2, 2005 |
| |
Wow...how incredibly erotic...I just finished reading it, and am enjoying the extreme hit of endorphins it gave me...You obviously have a deep understanding of what a good Dom/sub relationship is. Please continue writing! (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 3, 2005)
- Now that's definitely a compliment. I've never considered the possiblility of a story providing a rush of endorphins. That would be an interesting topic on the forums. Thanks for the feedback.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Belly
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 2, 2005 |
| |
Very arousing... (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 3, 2005)
- A compliment. Thank you.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
emmacd
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 2, 2005 |
| |
A good short story on a blowjob from a unwilling young lady. The insult of licking his boot a must for a sub. (8/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 3, 2005)
- Thanks for reading the story. I'm glad you liked the subject matter.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
ready2kneel
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 1, 2005 |
| |
Exposes the real truth about an honest dom/sub relationship. It is GIVE and TAKE on both sides. This story is about real life. (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 2, 2005)
- Saying it's about real life is a huge compliment. Thank you for the review.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 1, 2005 |
| |
Ah it seems like the poor Doms have to spend so much time and effort in the care and feeding of needy subs. Life's a bitch, ain't it? Great read robbermagnet do they have an eleven around here? (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 2, 2005)
- That's high praise! Thank you for the feedback.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Microwave0ven
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 1, 2005 |
| |
Good writing! Your descriptions of each stage where the dom was working on helping the slave move deeper into submission and enjoying herself was very good! Great work! (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 2, 2005)
- Thanks for the feedback!
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
learningtopleez
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 1, 2005 |
| |
Lord have mercy Robbermagnet! That was soooo hot! I don't know where this guy is, but if he has a brother...send him to me! All joking aside, you wrote an exceptionally beautiful story of submission! I will have good dreams tonight! (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
robbermagnet
(Edit) (Mar 2, 2005)
- Thanks for the feedback, LTP. If I had known I'd get such a response, I would have submitted stories a long time ago.
|
|
|
About 