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JoAnna Smith - Seaman Apprentice
Author: Sailor 861
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(Added on Feb 26, 2005)
(This month 50799 readers) (Total 61180 readers) |
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A disastrous date with a devious Domme, followed by a quirk of fate, gives joanne smith, 34, of Philadelphia, her first pleasure cruise to Nassau -- and her introduction to loving bondage at the hands of her very capable Dom. |
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| Reviewer:
albear
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Mar 7, 2005 |
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Hot damn Sailor!
How did you manage to sneak in all those boat-y related things and *still* make it hot?! Seriosuly, while I can see you obviously love your sailing, the story was well written and the characters were believable. I loved how caring William was. I wouldn't have minded it being a bit longer but the characters explored a bit more (because you definitely didn't lose my attention!) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Sailor861
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2005)
- Dear albear:
Thank you for your very kind comments. I an thinking of a sequel to Joanna's and William's story, perhaps inland, for a change (!) read "chains" ;-). I re-read the story myself for the first time and, yes, I think I can expand it. Stay tuned, my friends. I am so glad you enjoyed the work. :)
Sailor
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Avalonsslut
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Mar 5, 2005 |
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Very well written and i loved it!!!! A story that shows the caring and freedom that a D/s relationship can offer to B/both parties. Joanna's need for love and affection from William is very real to life. William's attentions are so gallant and caring, i almost had tears at T/their reunion. Thank You for showing what it can be like. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Sailor861
(Edit) (Mar 6, 2005)
- Dear Avalonslut:
Many thanks for your kind remarks about Joanna Smith -- seaman apprentice. This is my first-ever venture into BDSM and romance and your comments are most encouraging. I will try a sequel -- someday -- possibly involving a deeper relationship between Joanne and William. Consensual slavery, perhaps? Thanks again for writing.
Sailor
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spandexbound
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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The characters "feel" very real and have enough personality to make the developing story much more enjoyable. The imagery of surroundings and environment is very good and adds a lot to the story. Thank you for posting it! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Sailor861
(Edit) (Mar 2, 2005)
- Dear spandexbound: Many thanks indeed for your compliments about Joanna Smith and her Dom. This is one of my personal favorites -- and my first ever foray into the realm of romance and BDSM -- and you have encouraged me to continue in this theme. Many thanks.
Sailor
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Jadetiger
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Feb 27, 2005 |
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The plot was well conceived. I found the story very romantic. The visual descriptions were realistic and very exciting at times. The characters were very good. I liked this story because I am a sucker for romance. I thought this story could use a bit of work on sexual dialog. While I enjoyed your descriptions I was not drawn into Joanne’s sexual fantasy. More description of how she felt as she was being bond and how her body was reacting could really make a woman relate and get all wet. All the characters were interesting. If I had to pick a favorite it would be William. A strong and caring Dom is always a turn on.
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- Replied by:
Sailor861
(Edit) (Feb 27, 2005)
- Thanks for your kind remarks, Jadetiger. Your comments about deepening Joanne's character with respect to her sexual fantasy is noted and I will try to addresss this in another story and the sexual dialogue. This is my first-ever romantic-BDSM story and I hope to have another go fairly soon. Thanks for taking the time to write; your comments are appreciated.
Sincerely,
Sailor
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littleslut
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Feb 26, 2005 |
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a fantastic storry by a fantastic author. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Sailor861
(Edit) (Feb 27, 2005)
- Thank you again, lil slut, very much appreciated. I hope to have another story in the mill in the near future.
Best regards
Sailor
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