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Morgan and Me
Author: King Leopold
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(Added on Feb 12, 2005)
(This month 14997 readers) (Total 31496 readers) |
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Morgan is put throught the paces as a bound captive sex slave by me, her captor. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Spectre
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Feb 14, 2005 |
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An interesting begining. Could use an introduction to get us to this point (or a flashback). Needs to check consistancy (age?) Waiting for the next chapter. (7/10)
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rce
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Feb 14, 2005 |
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Readable, but boring, since it gives you nothing but the story of torture once the victim is captured. While this may be a good start, there should be a background story too. Maybe this is yet to come? (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 13, 2005 |
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good story but the writing might want to re read the story and check for various mistakes (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Feb 12, 2005 |
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There are some nice things in this story -- good energy and enthusiasm in the male POV -- but a couple of odd eyebrow-raisers too. "Small, grapefruit-sized breasts" ?? The author and I apparently differ as to what constitutes either normal-sized grapefruits or breasts. Also, our comely heroine is fifteen in part one, but only thirteen in part two. I like a good flashback as much as the next guy, but ... (6/10)
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