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Renee's Loan
Author: Golffdude
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(Added on May 3, 2001)
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A female student runs out of money and takes a loan to cover her tuition fees. Unfortunately, she forgets to repay, so the contractual collateral is called in: her own body! |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 5, 2009 |
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Sad to see a good idea go to waste. The setting of the "body for a loan" is some inventive thinking, but sadly after the "collection" the tale quickly slides into the 'usual routine'.
Master and Mistresses and Sexslaves... I had hoped for some enlightenment, a little more imagination.
The whole of what's been posted is still a nice read, with the bycicling duel as a high-point.
I had hoped to see a more sinister plan, like a pharmaceutical company doing some modifications experiments or something, not the standard fodder of a megalomaniac wanting to rule over a bunch of women, for seemingly no good reason at all...
Anyway, like I said, I enjoyed the story, but the start had me set my hopes too high, I guess.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
BlackIrish1495
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Jan 18, 2007 |
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Excelent, I hope to red many more of your stories. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 19, 2003 |
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can't wait for the next cpaters to be posted, when will they done?? soon i hope (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
misinglaurel
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May 5, 2001 |
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Good story. One of the better modification stories to be posted here in some time. For an unbelievalbe story, it was set up well.
It was creative with not all the usual topics covered in the usual way.
But the end was weak. Kind of seemed like "It's a wonderful Life" meets S&M and dog sex... Hope to see a part 2. (8/10)
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