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Hypno Happiness
Author: Steve Pervy
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(Added on Oct 19, 2004)
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A dangerous, predatory pervert unlocks the secret of hypnosis on an unsuspecting young mother. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
oldwino
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Nov 8, 2005 |
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Geat fantasy story. Susbend your intelect and enjoy. Can't wait for more chapters. My gf would love to read about the two young cunts going to school with out bras and panties with very short skirts and sheer tops. The doc would have them on the pill. They would fuck thier teachers for perfect grades. Theynwoulde swow tier cunts all over school and suck and fuck every boy that grabbed thier nude ass. Sally should be waxes and pierced and be a cumslave at work to get the "hero" promtions. We both want to read more of his work with the doc abusing more women and girls. (10/10)
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napig666
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Aug 17, 2005 |
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Great realisation of the mc theme. Eager to read more. (10/10)
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Brabazon
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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Keeps on getting better and better. Excellently written, with good dialogue and descriptions, and very, very sexy. One of the best stories on this site. (10/10)
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Woodchuck
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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The subject doesn't suit me, but the writing keeps me coming back. (8/10)
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La Toya
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Jul 8, 2005 |
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I hoep there is far more to come from this writer (9/10)
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peachers
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Dec 20, 2004 |
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this story keeps me watching for more.
i also like the slow approach,makes it more sexy,
love to have all the girls witness each others lust and abuse.
great story more please. (9/10)
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Satan666
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Dec 12, 2004 |
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Great story so far! I like the slow MC approach of the story, you get to enjoy the process more and get to know the characters better. (10/10)
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chksng19
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Nov 30, 2004 |
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A pleasing and well done story. Good character development and craftsmanship in writing shown throughout.
Anxious to have the story continue! The daughters offer many kinds of opportunity.
Continued chapters demonstrate good consistant detail, and keep the reader's attention. While it is fairly obvious where the story will go next, it's written in such a way as to make one excited to see how we get there. (9/10)
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londoner
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Nov 29, 2004 |
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Great story so far (up to chapter 4), classic stuff. Well-written, literate but down-to-earth, and very sexy. Look forward to seeing more of this. (10/10)
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Mobius
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Nov 12, 2004 |
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I like how this is going. Hope it continues.
He has the mother in his pocket now for the daughters. Will the mother be a willing / unwilling acompless in his dasterdly doing.
Keep going looking forward to the next installments. (9/10)
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Curtis
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Nov 5, 2004 |
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As a rule, I don't like mind control stories, but this was very well written. There's some detail about the hypnosis, to try to encourage suspension of disbelief, though I never quite got there (which is why a '9' rather than a '10'). Originality in spades, though. Considering how Lex Ludite is always on about 'the same old, same old', I'm surprised he hasn't given this story a try. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Oct 23, 2004 |
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A good start to the story. We look forward to reading about what other secrets may unfold in the future. (8/10)
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pippa
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Oct 23, 2004 |
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I agree with Author- if one doesn't like content then just pass over it( I do that a a lot -lol). I thought the story so far was well written and constructed. It's difficult to judge from just one chapter. I think I can guess where the story is going as there are seemingly only a set number of permutations possible. I look for a story to have twists and turns- to suprise me - that's if it is plot driven. Otherwise I like stories that make me relate to the characters and engage my emotions. I only gave this 7 as so far it hasnt done either but it's early days and it was "readable". (7/10)
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Nitrofox
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Oct 19, 2004 |
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I really liked this story, but I thought it lacked the neccessary amount of detail and length to make it truly long. It is a little reminiscent of "The Book" in its beginning, but I think with the introduction of the daughters, it could take a turn into new territory. On a more technical scale, it was written well and clearly. No real complaints. (8/10)
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hewiitlai
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Oct 19, 2004 |
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sorry, but i just don't like this type (2/10)
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- Replied by:
Nitrofox
(Edit) (Oct 19, 2004)
- Then don't review the story. The reviews are supposed to be about the way the story was written, not your personal preference.
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mkemse
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Oct 19, 2004 |
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i realy enjoyd reading it, wish there was more detail on what he had her do however (7/10)
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learningtopleez
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Oct 19, 2004 |
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Great fantasy! Well written and keeps one wanting more!! In more ways than one!! (10/10)
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