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Life in an Instant
Author: Hector
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(Added on Aug 11, 2004)
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Out at lunch woman spots a handsome stranger. Then he loses his wallet and in trying to help her life is changed in an instant. |
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Jan 7, 2008 |
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Excellent! The end was especially good! Wow...who would have followed the guy? LOL (10/10)
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lex ludite
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Aug 13, 2004 |
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This one is a winner. The alternate reality angle is well done. The breakdown of Jesse is well and truly documented; it sort of reminded me a bit of some of the stuff from Pooch's Story by Mr Ed. The heat is right up there, almost in the Harry Berg class which is the high rent district as far as I am concerned. I liked the relationship that was developed between Jesse and Brandi, it made sense to me in a perverted way. The ending was excellent and its timing was right on. The editing could have been a wee bit better, but under the circumstances, dare I complain too much? (9/10)
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