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People Watching People Author: Woolfighter
(Added on Jun 25, 2004) (This month 28101 readers) (Total 52855 readers)
The Ryans learn how a good idea can be applied, and become the neighborhood's toys.

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Average Rating: (7/10)
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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Aug 11, 2005
needs work, butthe story itself was good, i agree with lex's coments (8/10)

Reviewer: lex ludite (Edit) Rating: Jul 3, 2005
Considering that English is the author's third language, I have to cut him some slack, especially since he possesses a vocabulary that would make most college graduates jealous. I urge him to concentrate on improving his much less than perfect grammar which is his own worse enemy. As far as inventiveness and a quirky view of reality is concerned he is top drawer! This is an outstanding effort and deserves to be read by a wider audience despite its challenges. The writer knows how to generate heat and this little exercise is a good example of what he can do. I look forward to further installments of this tale. (7/10)
Replied by: woolfighter (Edit) (Jul 4, 2005)
Thank you, Lex. Rewies like yours makes me double me efforts.

Reviewer: Faibhar (Edit) Rating: Jun 28, 2004
Neighborhood Watch with an international flair crackles in this story. Despite lapses in grammar "P.W.P" is laden with plenty of kinky sex that tend to overcome any word foibles.
Keep up the good work! (6/10)
Replied by: woolfighter (Edit) (Jun 26, 2004)
Your comments, Faibhar, are very, very welcome.

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