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    The Transition
    
    Author: Dreamweaver
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    (Added on Jun 25, 2004)
            (This month 73364 readers) (Total 80731 readers) | 
   
   
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    A cyber Dom makes the transition to reality. | 
   
 
 
   
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     Weighed
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    Average 
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    | Reviewer: 
    bracemaiden
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    Aug 27, 2004 | 
   
   
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            Interesting concept, and the nervousness inherent in the situation really shows.  This is more of erotic literature than a simple jerk-off story. (9/10) 
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