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     Weighed
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    Average 
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    Highest 
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    Lowest 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Ruby
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    Oct 15, 2004 | 
   
   
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        Pagan, its so easy to get caught up in your stories.  This one has some very, very, hot scenes.  Keep up the good work.  Ruby. (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    LadyMencken
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    Jun 27, 2004 | 
   
   
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        Addendum: Unfortunately after the first page I was quite dissapointed -- I thought or hoped the story would be about the training of the bride by her new Husband/Dom. Oh well... Original Review: It is very rare to be so completely aroused so early in a story... I am just barely finished with the first page and already the story has earned a place on my hard drive and the time of my printer!! *wfg* -- Thank You, Pagan, so much for writing this story -- I am on my way to searching Your other stories now *soft happy happy smile* (5/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Faibhar
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    Jun 26, 2004 | 
   
   
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        Next time someone suggests Archery at a wedding reception you'll know what they really mean after reading this well-written story. (8/10) 
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