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Joy Ride
Author: Semiater
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(Added on Jun 16, 2004)
(This month 90768 readers) (Total 151488 readers) |
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A young girl takes her parent's car out for a Joy Ride when they're out of town and regrets every minute of it... |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
ramses
(Edit) |
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Aug 29, 2005 |
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very good start, even if the setting is a bit unbelievable. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Jun 20, 2004 |
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On the plus side the story flows well and is free of things that get in the way of reading, which means the mechanics are fine. However this story has been written , rewritten, written again and again and....... Why does the author, who knows how to write, choose to do, once again, a story that has more fingerprints on it than the only water glass at a picnic? This story is nothing but a paint by the numbers exercise and a waste of the author's talent, not to mention being totally unbelievable from start to its ultimate finish. (4/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 18, 2004 |
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the writers name says it all (10/10)
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Reviewer:
SickPuppy888
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Jun 17, 2004 |
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I look forward to the rest of it! (7/10)
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