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Spit And Polish
Author: Rafu
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(Added on May 6, 2004)
(This month 75872 readers) (Total 103240 readers) |
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Anna is the sloppiest cadet in the school corps, from her unbrushed hair to her unpolished boots, and her attitude is insufferable. Her superior officers agree that only a spot of late-night drill will lick her into shape. And it's not the sort of drill found in the Officer's Handbook... |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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One of the better discipline/humiliation stories set in the military. usually military settings tend too quick to veer towards the 'junta' type of style with the 'stereotypical' sadist interrogator.
Here we have an intelligently brought narrative, with not too over the top characters.
Well done, and never mind Alexia's comment: she's prolly pissed she didn't write it herself.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 18, 2004 |
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good story, just concentrate more on the details and less on dialog (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alexia
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May 9, 2004 |
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I found the story actually boring, and lacking in any real interest. Although the story did have some potential. Part of it may have had to do with my lack in military interest, but I must not be the only one. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 9, 2004 |
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Hey, how about that? An <educated> victim, no less. About time! Now for a little more exposition on why Anna is the way she is....
Excellent start, fun, readable, and progressing logically from "lesser" punishment to "greater". Many stories progress too quickly, for my taste.
Nicely done; can't wait for the next chapter! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
nova
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May 6, 2004 |
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Double-gorgeous...very subtle and full of minor little joyful moments such as when she was made to cum. i enjoyed the subtlety most of all, a little jewel of a story...is there any more??? (8/10)
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longrover
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May 6, 2004 |
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A jolly tale, well told. Bravo! (9/10)
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