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Training the Ultimate Slave
Author: Master Xm
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(Added on Apr 22, 2004)
(This month 65906 readers) (Total 95512 readers) |
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A woman is kidnapped and trained as a slave, then forced to aid in the slave training of a young girl. Unfortunately for them, only one will survive to become the master's personal slave. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 21, 2005 |
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Nice story (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Apr 26, 2004 |
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Nice story, more details would make the story better. Try to make several steps of intensity inside, so that You can write a second part. I hope You will write a second story. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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Whew! A nasty one... too many grammatical and spelling errors though, and the style was a little simplistic... (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Amber
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Apr 23, 2004 |
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I enjoyed the story. Granted there could have been som better gramatical choices, but overal I found it to be quite erotic. I hope the author continues the story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Tabenasai
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Apr 23, 2004 |
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As it says next to the 4 when selecting a rating, this story is OK, but lacks any real quality. Nearly every single sentence begins with "I", which makes for a very dull narrative. Overall, this is not a well written or terribly interesting story at all. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 22, 2004 |
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i enjoyed the story, only wish the chapter were longer and more detailed (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 22, 2004 |
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It gets an extra point for being Christian porn. If Mel Gibson had written it, it would have been more violent. What denomination was the lady from? (6/10)
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