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Modern Education
Author: C. Lakewood
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(Added on Apr 8, 2004)
(This month 14605 readers) (Total 37683 readers) |
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Sixteen-year-old Terry Owen and her mother discover that the girl's new school maintains old-fashioned disciplinary practices -- but with a twist. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 23, 2012 |
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I loved this story...very hot & erotic since basically the teen controlled her mom's naked punishment & humiliation thru her behavior at school & her teacher. Sounds like Mr. Or Mrs. Eve Adorer (below) had a mouthful of sour grapes & decided to spew forth. After reading this story you look pretty petty Eve! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Eve Adorer
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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[Someone needs to put nails through the soles of Lakewood’s jackboots, so here’s one for all the writers on this site whose best efforts s/he has trodden over with such opinionated arrogance as to make AH himself look like a boy scout….].
I make no claim to any skill as a writer. I have consistently repeated that I write only for fun. Lakewood’s arrogance has provided me with a new form of that fun: the review. I make no claim to be a worthwhile critic either; but let’s give it another shot…
Only reading a Lakewood story could you find yourself wishing you had an appointment with a dentist using extra long drills. I had to prod myself awake twenty times ploughing through this mire. Unfortunately, my haemorrhoids also kept me awake. That was possibly because I found their itch more exciting than what I was reading.
There is more drive and drama in a soggy lettuce leaf than there is in this story. To retain the salad metaphors, my recommendation would be that the same operations be performed on this veritable vegetable as those Dr Johnson recommended for the cucumber.
EA (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
jan311648
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Aug 18, 2005 |
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I haven't given this story top marks lightly; I really do believe that it stands comparison with the work of published authors. In fact, it could walk straight into a collection of more or less mainstream short stories with only a few changes. (For instance, delete the phrase 'Her butt-hole winked at us' as redundant; change 'piss herself' to 'wet herself', and 'gleamed with wetness to 'gleamed with moisture' - the latter on grounds of felicity!)
The whole is written in the style which I imagine a bright American teen-age girl would naturally employ; insofar as I'm any judge!
Extremely enjoyable - what more can I say? (10/10)
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BigCat
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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Short very well written punishment-with-a-twist tale. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Apr 13, 2004 |
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Nicely written punishment story. We wish it was taken a bit farther at the homefront after school, but otherwise no complaints. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Apr 13, 2004 |
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One of the few times I get to give a higher rating that lex luddite! I found the story extremely enjoyable (and not just because it caters to my core kink). I must agree with mookie42, however, that more details would be in order. Particularly apropos would be a better description of mommy's disrobing, her feelings as she is forced to spend the day with an increasingly full bladder. How about a more exacting picture of her caning?
The author obviously has a talent for this type of writing. I think that a second chapter is definitely in order! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Apr 12, 2004 |
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I really enjoyed reading Modern Education. I especially liked the ending. I look forward to the next installment. (8/10)
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junk1312vcs
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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Really good story, looking forward to reading more (9/10)
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mookie42
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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a little more detail would have helped
excellent twist
including terry at home?? a new story? (7/10)
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mantis
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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Fascinating concept. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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Excellent work getting mom involved; opportunities for more tales from this school. Keeps you wanting more, good job!
Moves right along, holding interest. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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wow, sorry i do not believe in long wordy reviews (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Standfast
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Apr 8, 2004 |
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Great use of one of my favorite devices, \"proxy punishment\", the mother acting as a \"whipping girl\". And excellent to see bathroom privileges revoked for disciplinary reasons. Nice work! (9/10)
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rafu
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Apr 8, 2004 |
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Funny and wicked. Any story that contains the sentence "Her butt-hole winked at us" gets my vote. (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Apr 8, 2004 |
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Palladian architecture and Edwardian interiors indeed; for a sixteen year old Terry certainly has refined tastes. However her behavior was perfectly fine as far as this reader was concerned. This well written story will provide a pleasant, although brief diversion for those into CP, especially caning. I'm curious as to why Terry's mother didn't do a bit of retaliating on her unruly child at home. That might have made the story a bit more enjoyable. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
C_Lakewood
(Edit) (Apr 8, 2004)
- Yes, well, as you have no doubt surmised,
I am personally very fond of Palladian
architecture and Edwardian interiors, but I
have been since I was younger than Terry. (I
might not have known the names then, but I
knew what I liked.) Your question about the
lack of retaliation suggests to me that I did
not make this point clear enough in the story.
Terry held the whip hand (as it were) because
the mother was afraid her cushy divorce
settlement might be overturned if her ex-husband
found out what was going on.
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