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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 19, 2005 |
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I cannot believe you squeezed so much story into 16k! This is not a chapter, but a complete and satisfying tale. There's not only character development, there's lots of well-described sex. Very tame for this site; I think the story codes need some work. As lex suggested, 'f-self' would be appropriate, and I'd add 'hardcore' and maybe 'teen'. Different from the usual run of Library submissions, I'm very glad this popped up on 'random story'. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 23, 2004 |
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great concept, wish there was some blackmail in it justto add some spice (8/10)
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lex ludite
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Mar 13, 2004 |
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Had the author added "self" to the title, as in self degradation, it would have made more sense, since Anne seemed to be quite satisfied in her way of life. The story is well written, although until Cleveland was referenced, I thought it was set in the UK. The ending summed up Anne's dreary life in a nice neat way, showing that this writer does know something about the craft. (7/10)
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