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Five on One
Author: Willailla
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(Added on Mar 12, 2004)
(This month 11724 readers) (Total 29315 readers) |
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Five brothers rape their sister. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 19, 2006 |
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As another reader said, the story is not finished and the policeman part, nothing to do with it is quite disturbing. They story has some good basics, but it can be improved. (6/10)
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arain
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Mar 14, 2004 |
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hmmm...ok, as i said in your last story, it was very well wirtten.
drake is right though, the names were kind of comical and took away from the story. also, you never really finish your story...instead of ending it by actually talking about the police officer, and actually getting into the bdsm, you end it.
my advice is make it more than one part every time. Take your time, we're not going anywhere (7/10)
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drake7
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Mar 13, 2004 |
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A little too stereotypical. The brothers names and the "squeal like a pig" part were almost comical. It was a good read with only a few grammatical errors though. (6/10)
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