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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
webjunky
(Edit) |
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Dec 23, 2005 |
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I though very highly of the story,but the girls age was a problem,she should be 12 to 16 and I look forward to her training as a "fuck toy"
please PLEASE give us more (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Girl
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Mar 26, 2004 |
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I kept wondering why is this little girl so joyously doing these things with this grown stranger? That is conspicuously absent from the story. Is her self-esteem rock bottom, or is she being abused by her own parents, or bullied at school? Something has to be driving her to do something that every normal young child knows through constant lectures from parents and teachers is dead wrong. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
arain
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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i actually thought it was fairly well-written...if the girl had been maybe a bit older (like 14) not only would it be more realistic...but more appropriate. Also how is this BDSM related really? (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
KindUncle4Neice
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Mar 17, 2004 |
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Enjoyed the story and felt it was well written. Hopefully the author continues with it. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Mar 8, 2004 |
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This story appears to be on the wrong site. The writing skills were good however. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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theres nothing particularly wrong with the writing, its the content i find objectionable. better not to let people know who you are, or youre likely to get a lot of hate mail. (1/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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Some thoughtful reviews by some very senior reviewers. My "one" is not for the writing skills which are acceptable to good but for the content. One of the underlying precepts (code of conduct) for this site is that we shall not support fiction which depicts child eroticism. I realize that we would probably dis Nabokov on this site today, but those are the operating rules under which we operate. Sorry. I agree with Powerone that the story (obviously the first part of a serial) is well written. And writing about an erotic relationship between an older man and an adolescent would probably be tolerable. But this story is probably crossing the line that we hold to here. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Powerone
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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I always like to judge a story by how good it is, not if I agree with it. This story is well written with good dialogue. I tend to ignore the age and just read the story and I liked this one. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
fetish101
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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I have to agree with the wrong site sentiments..
I seem to remember something about 12 or 13 being the minimum age Jinn would allow in a story. Perhaps he's reformed that rule.
It was well written though. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Chloe
(Edit) (Mar 8, 2004)
- Perhaps I can edit it to change the age?
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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Wrong site! (1/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Mar 6, 2004)
- Between this one, which is well written by the way, and the Bjork rant which is equally inappropriate, there seems to be something amiss in what gets onto this site supposedly dedicated to BDSM fantasies.
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