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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Apr 8, 2007 |
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a very, very hard read (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Mar 2, 2004 |
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Your writing has promise. It just lacks execution. Get someone to proof read for you. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Mar 1, 2004 |
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Every time I think the author has seen the light and is cleaning up his act, he reverts to form. I know there is a writer struggling to get out of this undisciplined, lazy shell. Unfortunately this latest example of poor grammar, punctuation and spelling combined with a substandard plot is just another reason to become irritated with a talent going to hell in a handbasket. What makes it doubly irritating is the way Pagan gives us glimpses of his talent, such as the slurred speech of the southern belle, then like some spoiled brat stamps his foot down and makes another mess. In the immortal words of Jimmy Durante, "What a revolting development!" (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Feb 27, 2004 |
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A good premise - boys bored with their situation - is unfortunately done in by text too bold for the eyes and spelling too wrong for the mind. (5/10)
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