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Gaining The Upper Hand
Author: Avery Childs
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(Added on Jan 14, 2004)
(This month 54829 readers) (Total 68219 readers) |
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Ariel and Destiny find out about Dan's infidelities. But when they go to confront him, Dan kidnaps them instead. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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not real sure what to say, you seemed to go in different directions, if further parts are posted i may have more to add, very different story (6/10)
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bdsmbill
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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Well, I didn't really like it. Too violent and no finesse. (5/10)
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