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Slave to Hooters Waitresses
Author: misterjim
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(Added on Nov 6, 2003)
(This month 110254 readers) (Total 155726 readers) |
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Dave got more than he expected when he responded to a mystery e mail from a hooters restaurant waitress offering him sex. He soon found himslf IN BONDAGE forced to serve the mystery girl and her girl friend as they worked to train him into being a perfect sex slave. |
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Sep 2, 2004 |
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A great idea, but a bit too hurried in the development. Greater variety in characters, and a more believeable "breaking" of the victim would be very helpful. (6/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 17, 2003 |
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would have been great if the Hooters waiteress was the sub, not to many males i know would apply at Hooters for obvious reasons. I live fantasy, but they stories that are fantasy need to be made believeable if nothing else (6/10)
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trainmanretep
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Nov 10, 2003 |
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The concept of the story is quite good. Problem is that it could have used some editing. There are typos that spell check would not pick up because the spelling is actually correct. I'm interested in seeing a second chapter hopefully with the writing "tightened" up a bit. (5/10)
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reverie35
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Nov 6, 2003 |
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You need to tease ideas early. A section of fantasies about the girls could set a base for later actions. Did he like feet to start? (7/10)
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