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Slave to Hooters Waitresses Author: misterjim
(Added on Nov 6, 2003) (This month 101965 readers) (Total 147437 readers)
Dave got more than he expected when he responded to a mystery e mail from a hooters restaurant waitress offering him sex. He soon found himslf IN BONDAGE forced to serve the mystery girl and her girl friend as they worked to train him into being a perfect sex slave.

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Reviewer: Abe Froman (Edit) Rating: Sep 2, 2004
A great idea, but a bit too hurried in the development. Greater variety in characters, and a more believeable "breaking" of the victim would be very helpful. (6/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Nov 17, 2003
would have been great if the Hooters waiteress was the sub, not to many males i know would apply at Hooters for obvious reasons. I live fantasy, but they stories that are fantasy need to be made believeable if nothing else (6/10)

Reviewer: trainmanretep (Edit) Rating: Nov 10, 2003
The concept of the story is quite good. Problem is that it could have used some editing. There are typos that spell check would not pick up because the spelling is actually correct. I'm interested in seeing a second chapter hopefully with the writing "tightened" up a bit. (5/10)

Reviewer: reverie35 (Edit) Rating: Nov 6, 2003
You need to tease ideas early. A section of fantasies about the girls could set a base for later actions. Did he like feet to start? (7/10)

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