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One to Remember
Author: OneTimeMaster
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(Added on Oct 14, 2003)
(This month 50432 readers) (Total 56722 readers) |
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Dave insists that his sassy sister Sarah receive a spanking or be kicked out of the local gang. Sarah turns the table on Dave by asked Jeff to give her the spanking. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 25, 2005 |
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not bad at all (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
myfigment
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Oct 15, 2003 |
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Great beginning for a long exciting story. Makes me want to be Sarah! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Oct 15, 2003 |
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Story shows promise. Grammar and usage OK. Characters need development. Let's see it develop and I may revise my rating. Keep at it! (7/10)
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