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    Time Gentlemen Please
    
    Author: Pagan
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    (Added on Oct 11, 2003)
            (This month 54594 readers) (Total 72761 readers) | 
   
   
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    You can find the price for being greedy a little more than you want to pay. | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    Curtis
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    Oct 18, 2003 | 
   
   
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        Really very enjoyable.  I do think the narrator spent too much time explaining why he wasn't intervening to save his wife, and I'm not sure if this meets the 'hardcore' story code (it IS a gang rape, after all), but far and away the best work I've seen from this author. (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    lex ludite
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    Oct 14, 2003 | 
   
   
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        I never thought I'd be using the words "well written" and "Pagan", in the same sentence. Now pardon me while I mount my pig and fly away. Well done Pagan.   (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    woolfighter
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    Oct 13, 2003 | 
   
   
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        You`ve the knack. Erotic, believable and fun. Good job. (8/10) 
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