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The Cumuppance Author: Lofwyrkp
(Added on Aug 12, 2003) (This month 51441 readers) (Total 64650 readers)
The office bitch gets her just deserts.

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Number of Ratings: 6
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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (7.5/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jul 31, 2005
very well written as well (9/10)

Reviewer: sunburststrat (Edit) Rating: May 14, 2005
Interesting story with an unexpected twist in the end. That sets it up nicely for a follow up. (7/10)

Reviewer: JonBlacker (Edit) Rating: Feb 20, 2005
Nice pace and flow. (8/10)

Reviewer: crickette (Edit) Rating: Jan 24, 2005
I liked your story alot. It was well written and the suprise ending was priceless not to mention her colleagues remarks the next day. I smell a little blackmail in the air ! Would love to see a part II. (7/10)

Reviewer: Jill Bird (Edit) Rating: Jun 28, 2004
i enjoyed the story. it came at me from \"the side\", so to speak. the narrator being a woman was a nice surprise.
i was dis-appointed when it turned out not to be a true rape, but the writing was good and the action made me wet. (7/10)

Reviewer: boccaccio2000g (Edit) Rating: Aug 16, 2003
I don't think any reviewer likes to give out unfavorable reviews, but if we didn't give out honest but unflattering critiques from time to time, the good reviews wouldn't ring quite as true, would they? That being the case, I'm delighted to give this story a MUCH better rating than the one I gave the first story I read by this author. This story captures the reader's interest right away and holds it until the closing words. It is only a vignette, and the characters might have been developed a little more, but the description of the key scene is very nicely done. A slight deduction for this sentence -- "The second guy rips her panties down off her legs, and you let out a quiet gasp as you realise that she's not a natural blonde!" To me that doesn't quite ring true -- surely the possibility of someone not being a natural blonde doesn't warrant a gasp and an exclamation point in this day and age. Good job. (7/10)

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