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The Punishment
Author: sinnamon
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(Added on Aug 7, 2003)
(This month 12025 readers) (Total 22509 readers) |
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A slave learns the true meaning of punishment for the first time from her Master. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
delish
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Feb 25, 2008 |
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This is a beautiful story. It's not a stroke story, but there is something raw and real about it that I love. Highly recommended- and it's a quick read, too. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Aug 10, 2003 |
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There is a very interesting bond of love between Master and slave in this story. The way it is brought out garnishes a high rating from me. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
dav4jon
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Aug 9, 2003 |
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Definitely enjoyable, although - as boccacio2000g said - the erotic aspect of the story is somewhat lost (or deliberately abandoned?) towards the end. The psychological development as well as some technical details tend to indicate that the author has first-hand experience of what she's writing about. Pity the codes are not 100% accurate (torture? serious?). (7/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Aug 8, 2003 |
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Capably written, with a lot of erotic tension early on. But in the end I think the story succeeds better as a Poe-esque claustrophobic psychodrama than as an erotic story. The author does a nice job getting inside the anxious head of the victim, but the story lacks the tactile and sensual physicality that many of us look for in erotic stories. Those among you with subtler, more nuanced tastes than mine may well rank this a notch or two higher than I did -- it is certainly well written. (7/10)
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