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Jane's Sundress
Author: Oz Greg
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(Added on Jul 17, 2003)
(This month 50134 readers) (Total 60234 readers) |
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Jane loses a dare to her roommate and has to walk around the local Mall in a short dress. Unfortunately for Jane her favourite shoes are on sale, so how can she try on shoes in such a short dress? |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 30, 2006 |
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nice and cute story. Not spectacular but stories as these have also their charm and value (7/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 18, 2004 |
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it was a good read but nothing spectacular (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Jul 20, 2003 |
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This is genre fiction, aimed at a very restricted audience. As such, it suceeds to a high degree. The fiction explores the interface between clothing and erotic arousal - and does it well. Although this particular aspect of BDSM fiction is not my favorite, I have to acknowledge the artistry of the author. In addition, the author has mastered the essentials of the use of the English language although I agree that verb tense usage could be better. One of the beauties of the internet publication system is the ability to give expression to a large number of variant expressions, most of which are not necessarily those which most appeal to a given reader. We must above all acknowledge acomplishment in areas removed from our own. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 18, 2003 |
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it could use some more verbs and proper tenses. It needs considerable work (3/10)
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