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Clueless, Cher's friends
Author: Jorge Garcia
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(Added on Jun 24, 2003)
(This month 22673 readers) (Total 36895 readers) |
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Cher discovers her new mental powers...and uses them well against those she wants to pay her some personal offenses... |
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Average (?):  (3/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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do not understand the theme, it is listed a M/f but center's on Cher, broken english is not an issue to me, the confusion of the content is (5/10)
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Firepager
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Jul 7, 2003 |
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i have read far better (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
don11
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Jun 27, 2003 |
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Potentially intersting idea.
Pity the execution is so poor. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jun 27, 2003 |
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It is clear that the author is not a native speaker of English. The concept is fine, but the execution is lacking due to the language skills. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jun 25, 2003 |
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PATHETIC! When you submit a story ... any story, to a website, you are expected to write it in a language that humankind is capable of understanding. This story does not follow any such guideline. Kindly do us a favor and write your story in english next time. Danke Schoen. (1/10)
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lex ludite
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Jun 24, 2003 |
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This is almost unreadable. The author evidently either was raised in a country where english was not spoken or has a spell checker with a sense of humor. I strongly recommend that this story be approached with extreme caution due to the impossible syntax. On the bright side it does generate heat, but I was too confused to really appreciate it. (2/10)
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