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Meeting at the Mall
Author: April
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(Added on Jan 5, 2001)
(This month 65968 readers) (Total 75917 readers) |
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A sub's first meeting with a Dom she had been chatting with on-line. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
| Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 11, 2004 |
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neither good, nor bad, neither terrible nor great (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Dec 30, 2003 |
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Starts off too passionate – mad lust at first sight. Master does not pay enough attention to the slave to keep her entertained.
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| Reviewer:
RTNYMaster
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Apr 14, 2003 |
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Unreadable. Sentences starting with So and Well. Unacceptable grammar even for elementary school. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Jan 7, 2001 |
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Not bad, i enjoyed this. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ramster |
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Jan 7, 2001 |
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I have trained several slaves in real life. This story captures the emotion and tension very well. An enjoyable story. (8/10)
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